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Betrayed by hope

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Summary

PART 1 That day, at dawn, I woke up and I prayed Fajr. I asked Allah to give me a good average, and I also prayed for my friends. In the morning, I went to school with my friends. I was very nervous. Each of them had the average I had asked for in my prayers. It was as if God had accepted my prayer. I was very happy. I asked my aunt to go get my report card, and I stayed under a tree with my friend Aïchatou. My friend Fama was with my aunt to get the report card. I was very happy. My face was wearing a big smile. Then I heard my name. I turned around. Fama had lowered her eyes and put her hands on her mouth, shaking her head from left to right. I thought my prayer had been accepted. But when I found out that I had failed, my heart became heavy, like a sponge soaked in water. My heart felt like a thousand bombs exploding one after the other.

Genre
Drama
Author
Fatima
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 betrayed

PART 1

That day, at dawn, I woke up and I prayed

Fajr. I asked Allah to give me

a good average, and I also prayed for my friends.

In the morning, I went to school with my friends.

I was very nervous. Each of them had the average I

had asked for in my prayers. It was as if

God had accepted my prayer. I was very

happy.

I asked my aunt to go get my

report card, and I stayed under a tree with my

friend Aïchatou. My friend Fama was with my aunt

to get the report card. I was very happy. My

face was wearing a big smile.

Then I heard my name. I turned around.

Fama had lowered her eyes and put her hands on

her mouth, shaking her head from left to right.

I thought my prayer had been accepted. But

when I found out that I had failed, my heart

became heavy, like a sponge soaked in

water. My heart felt like a thousand bombs

exploding one after the other.

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