La Melodía Del Desasosiego by Mageina Saric at Inkitt
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La melodía del desasosiego

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Summary

Colección de poemas

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Creo que está oculto

Creo que está oculto; reducido a un débil murmullo tras cada latido desbocado que sale de mi corazón.

Más lo he sentido en el presagio de un día distinto, que llega con la primera y más bella luz del amanecer.

Creo que está oculto; aprisionado y abatido, en la opresión que me ha aplastado sin compasión dentro del pecho.

Lo he vislumbrado, sin embargo, danzando como una promesa lejana, en el brillo naranja de la puesta de sol.

Creo que está oculto; perdido y destrozado bajo el ritmo incesante del temblor de mis manos.

Me ha permitido, a pesar de todo, que lo admire con el alma cuando baja como un sueño desde la luna plateada.

Aparece en pequeños destellos, inalcanzable pero mío, en cada nueva ilusión. Lo percibo, lo presiento y lo anhelo, pero desaparece en cuanto la mirada se vuelve a perder.

Se desvanece, me abandona, y yo creo que está oculto.

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