White Knight and The Prodigy

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Summary

Welcome back to Ground Zero, we heard about the Metallic Wander and now we focus on her younger siblings Harrison and Kelis Crone. Still separate in what feels to be in alternate universes, crises falls upon them and forces them to cross paths. A fearless soldier with so much to lose, alongside a brilliant alchemist struggling to keep those they love and cherish safe.

Status
Complete
Chapters
20
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

CHAPTER 1 RED AND WHITE

My pulse held steady at a resting sixty beats per minute. Optimal. Any deviation would indicate a system failure or an inefficient emotional flare, neither of which I permitted.

I stood at the apex of the Grand Atrium in Pura Terra, my hands clasped loosely behind my back. The air in the enclave was perfectly scrubbed, filtered through grade-A purification systems that removed the scent of the dying world outside, leaving only sterile ozone and synthetic jasmine. It was quiet, save for the synchronized breathing of three thousand citizens gathered in the amphitheater below. I cataloged the sound as a singular, rhythmic data point.

They were a sea of red. Crimson, burgundy, scarlet, and rust. It was the mandated attire for the audience, a visual representation of the pure, untainted blood circulating within our walls.

I, however, wore stark, unblemished white.

Reflectance value: 98%. The color of a blank slate. The colour of a groom. To me, it was merely the uniform required for the current protocol. I did not know who was going to walk down the aisle. I didn’t need to.

Personal preference was a flawed, obsolete metric for human survival. The enclave’s genetic algorithms had calculated the optimal pairing to yield the strongest, most resilient offspring. DNA dictated destiny. I was twenty years old, and my biology had been deemed required for the next generation of soldiers. I accepted this as one would a mission briefing.

The heavy, reinforced doors at the end of the hall unsealed with a hydraulic hiss. The low murmur of the crimson crowd silenced immediately. She stepped through the archway, also dressed in pristine white. My ocular implants adjusted to the sudden flood of backlighting, analyzing her gait as she approached. Her steps were measured, perfectly balanced, rolling from heel to toe with zero wasted kinetic energy. A fighter’s stride.

Data streamed through my memory banks as her face came into focus. Katana Royall. Known among the lower ranks as the Scarlet Dancer. She was objectively beautiful. Symmetrical features, clear eyes, and a posture that spoke of rigorous, disciplined training.

The citizens loved her. She was a beacon of morale, a warrior who fought with a fluid, terrifying grace that earned her the moniker. But as she stopped beside me at the altar, I felt nothing. No nervous flutter, no surge of adrenaline, no warmth. My internal monitors reported zero chemical fluctuations. Just the steady, rhythmic thrum of a machine functioning perfectly within its parameters. They called her the Scarlet Dancer. They called me the Tin Man. The designation was accurate; I was an empty vessel for Pura Terra’s utility.

The High Cleric stepped up to the podium, his robes sweeping over the polished floor.

“We gather to witness the union of optimal bloodlines,” the Cleric’s voice echoed through the Atrium, devoid of the passion I had read about in pre-war literature. I processed his words for their literal meaning, ignoring the symbolic weight others seemed to attach to them.

Katana turned to face me. Her eyes searched mine, perhaps looking for a flicker of something, reassurance, hesitation, humanity. She found nothing but the cold, flat stare of a soldier. She masked her disappointment well, her expression smoothing into stoic duty.

“Extend your hands,” the Cleric instructed.

I offered my hand. Katana placed hers in mine. Her skin was warm, pulsing with life and the nervous energy of the moment. My hand was cold, calloused from years of gripping iron and synthetic polymer.

“Repeat the vows of the Pure,” the Cleric commanded.

“I, Harrison Crone,” I began, my voice a flat, even baritone that carried no inflection.

“I, Katana Royall,” she echoed, her voice softer, yet possessing a core of tempered steel.

“Vow to preserve the sanctity of the human form,” we said in unison. “To stand as a shield against the rot of the wastes.”

I looked at her, processing the words without internalizing them. When I was a child, long before the Holy War, I was placed on a cold stone altar alongside my sisters. I remember the chanting. I remember the tearing of the atmosphere. But whatever celestial entity tried to claw its way into my soul found no purchase. The Spirit feeds on emotion, on passion, on the vibrant spectrum of the human heart.

The ritual hadn’t given me a demon. It had simply scooped out my insides, leaving behind a hollow, unreadable shell. The Spirit was non-existent in me because I was non-existent. I was a weapon disguised as a man, my soul replaced by a series of operational commands.

“I vow to remain untouched by the mutated flesh of the fallen,” Katana recited, her grip tightening slightly on my hand.

“And I vow to remain undefiled by the celestial plague of the Spirit,” I finished, stating the final, most crucial law of Pura Terra. “To keep my mind closed to the whispers, and my soul bound only to the earth.”

“By the blood in our veins, we are bound,” the Cleric declared.

“Bound in purity,” Katana and I finished.

It was done. I was now tethered to the Scarlet Dancer. I looked out over the sea of red, my heart continuing its steady, unbroken sixty beats per minute. The transit from the Grand Atrium to the reception sector took precisely four minutes and twenty seconds.

We walked shoulder to shoulder down the pristine, white-lit corridors of Pura Terra. Katana moved silently beside me. We had never formally spoken prior to the altar, though our service records were mutually accessible. I knew her combat statistics; she presumably knew mine.

Yet, as we walked, her gaze was a constant, tactile weight on the side of my face. My peripheral vision registered her staring. Her eyes tracked the line of my jaw, the rigid posture of my shoulders, searching for data I was not broadcasting. I detected the slight, rapid flutter of her pulse at her carotid artery—an elevated heart rate. A chemical influx of dopamine and adrenaline. Pre-war biological texts would classify her physiological response as infatuation. To me, it was simply an inefficient expenditure of energy.

“Well, if it isn’t the enclave’s favorite brick wall.”

A heavy hand slapped the reinforced fabric of my shoulder. I didn’t flinch, already having registered her heavy, uneven footfalls approaching from behind.

Lita Royall. Katana’s twin sister. She was flanked by the sea of crimson-clad guests moving toward the banquet hall, but her presence was always louder than a crowd. We served in the same vanguard squad. Her combat proficiency was rated in the top fifth percentile; her impulse control was rated at absolute zero.

“Lita,” Katana murmured softly, her voice a smooth contrast to her sister’s abrasive tone. “We are in the ceremonial transit.”

“Oh, relax, Kat. The Cleric isn’t looking,” Lita scoffed, sidestepping to walk backward in front of us. Even in the mandated crimson attire of the audience, Lita looked like she had just rolled out of a sparring ring, her hair messy and her posture aggressively relaxed. She flashed a wicked, sharp-toothed grin at her sister, then pointed a thumb at me.

“Gotta admit, sis, when the genetic algorithms pinged, I nearly choked on my rations. I thought they’d pair you with someone who actually, you know, breathes. But you got the Tin Man.” Lita leaned in, her voice dropping into a loud, mocking whisper. “I’ve been in the trenches with him for two years, Kat. I’m pretty sure his default setting is ‘standby.’ You’re going to have to do all the talking for the rest of your natural life.”

A flush of deep red bloomed across Katana’s cheeks. She looked down, embarrassed, but a sudden, bright laugh escaped her lips anyway. It was a pleasant acoustic sequence.

“Stop it, Lita,” Katana said, though the smile remained fixed on her face. She looked back up, her eyes immediately finding mine again. The embarrassment faded, replaced instantly by that same quiet, fascinated observation. It was as if my absolute lack of reaction was a puzzle she was eager to solve.

“I’m just warning you!” Lita barked a laugh, spinning back around to walk forward, kicking her boots heavily against the polished floor. “If you try to have a romantic moment with him, he’s probably just going to recite the ammo count for a standard-issue plasma rifle. Good luck, Scarlet!”

“Your sister’s vocal output exceeds necessary decibel limits by thirty percent,” I stated evenly, looking straight ahead as the reception doors came into view.

Katana’s laugh softened into a quiet, musical hum. “She has always been loud,” Katana replied softly, leaning just a fraction of an inch closer into my personal space. Her shoulder brushed mine. “But I do not mind the quiet, Harrison.”

I processed her statement. The data suggested she was attempting to establish an emotional baseline for our mandated partnership. She was charmed by the silence, mistaking the void inside me for stoicism. She thought I was a quiet man. She failed to recognize that silence was the only thing I had to offer.

She didn’t realize I was just an empty one.

“Understood,” I replied, my voice flat and monotone as we crossed the threshold into the reception hall.

The banquet sector was operating at maximum capacity. The acoustic dampeners struggled against the overlapping conversations of three thousand guests, and the ambient temperature had risen by two point four degrees.

Lita immediately dragged Katana into a cluster of high-ranking officers and their families. Katana glanced back at me twice before being swallowed by the sea of crimson. I did not follow. Social integration was not a required parameter for this phase of the event. I relocated to the perimeter of the hall, standing at parade rest in the shadow of a grand pillar.

“Report, Tin Man.”

The voice was low, heavily textured with gravel and years of inhaled battlefield smoke. A tall, broad-shouldered figure materialized from the darker alcove beside me.

Captain Bronson White.

If Katana was the Scarlet Dancer, Bronson was the night itself. Even in the mandatory formalwear of the enclave, he wore a dark, tactical overcoat that swept around him like a bat’s wing. His jaw was scarred, his eyes perpetually scanning the room for threats that didn’t exist inside the walls. He was my commanding officer, my mentor, and the closest metric I had to a paternal unit.

He was also the man who broke down the stone doors of the ritual chamber fourteen years ago. My internal memory files of that night are corrupted fragmented images of chanting, a tearing sky, and then Bronson’s armored hands pulling me from the altar before the Spirit could finish hollowing me out. But the file is incomplete. He had never submitted the full mission report. I knew he kept the exact details of what happened in that room locked away in his own head.

“Vitals are optimal, Captain,” I replied, my gaze fixed straight ahead. “Ceremony concluded within projected timeframes. Blood pressure is steady.”

Bronson let out a slow, heavy exhale. He leaned against the pillar, his dark eyes tracking Katana across the room as she politely laughed at something Lita said.

“That’s not what I asked, Harrison,” Bronson said quietly, dropping the rank.

“I am operating at peak efficiency. I do not understand the query.”

Bronson turned his head, fixing his intense, shadowed gaze on me. He knew how my mind worked. He knew the ritual had burned away the circuitry required to feel. So, when he needed to teach me how to be human, he translated it into the only language my brain could process: mission parameters.

“The algorithms paired your DNA,” Bronson said, his voice dropping to a low rumble meant only for us. “But in this life, son, you are only given one wife. Just one.”

He looked away, staring into the middle distance of the banquet hall, but I knew he wasn’t seeing the crimson crowd.

“I had mine,” he murmured. “Mira.”

I accessed the personnel files in my head. Mira White. Designation: Rogue Vanguard. Status: MIA in the Ashlands. She had been a ghost on the battlefield. Agile, unpredictable, fighting with a predatory, feline grace that defied standard military doctrine.

“She was a warrior, just like your Katana,” Bronson continued, the gravel in his voice softening into something resembling an old ache. “But more than that... she understood me. She understood the dark corners of my mind. We didn’t just fight together; we anchored each other. When she disappeared in the Ashlands... the silence she left behind was deafening.”

He turned back to me, gripping my shoulder. His hand was heavy, grounding.

“I know how your head works, Harrison. I know what that altar took from you,” Bronson said fiercely. “But you listen to me. Your first job, your primary directive; is no longer just to hold a rifle. It is her.”

He pointed a gloved finger toward Katana.

“You make sure she is protected. You make sure she is cherished. You perform whatever actions are required to make her feel loved, to make her feel like she is the absolute center of your operational grid. Your world. Do you understand?”

“You are instructing me to simulate emotional devotion to optimize our unit cohesion,” I stated, processing the logic.

Bronson’s jaw tightened, a flash of deep sorrow crossing his features before he masked it with tactical resolve. “I am telling you to be a husband, Harrison. If she trusts you, if she knows you have her back in the dark... the two of you will be a force this broken world won’t know how to reckon with.” He squeezed my shoulder one last time. “Do not let her disappear into the wastes. Keep her close.”

“Directive logged, Captain,” I replied. “Primary objective updated.”

Bronson offered a tight, grim nod, stepping back into the shadows of the alcove. “Go get your wife, Tin Man.”

Before I could formulate an approach vector to execute the Captain’s new directive, the sea of crimson parted. Katana glided through the crowd. There was no other word for her movement; it was a fluid, highly efficient displacement of space. She stopped in front of me, the pristine white of her dress a stark contrast to the shadows of the alcove.

She extended a small, unloved hand. “Dance with me, Harrison.”

I analyzed the request. Dancing was a social ritual, rhythmic kinetic synchronization. “Acknowledged,” I replied, taking her hand.

I followed her to the center of the hall. The acoustic dampeners adjusted as the band shifted to a slower, sweeping orchestral piece. Katana stepped into my space, attempting to initiate a standard ballroom sequence. She moved with elegant, practiced grace, expecting me to lead the complex footwork.

My motor functions were calibrated for combat maneuvering, not ballroom rhythm. I miscalculated the spatial requirement of her dress. My heavy boot collided awkwardly with her foot, disrupting her center of gravity. I attempted to correct my posture, but my rigid movements only made it worse. I looked like a malfunctioning sentry droid.

A ripple of auditory feedback washed over the hall. Laughter. It started near Lita’s squad and spread through the crimson audience. I attempted to reset my stance and try the sequence again, but Katana stopped moving. She read the room, her eyes darting across the laughing faces of the elite officers and citizens.

Instead of stepping back in embarrassment, she recalibrated her approach. She took my right arm and physically wrapped it around her waist. She took my left hand in her small, warm one, pressing it close to her chest. She didn’t try to force me into the complex steps again. Instead, she simply shifted her weight, initiating a slow, basic rocking motion from side to side.

I mirrored the kinetic shift. Left. Right. Left. Right.

She closed her eyes and laid her cheek against my collarbone. I could feel the rhythmic thump of her heartbeat pressing against my sternum. We didn’t speak.

The laughter died down, but the ambient noise shifted into a low, buzzing murmur. I registered the whispers around us. They were mocking the performance. They were making fun of the Tin Man, pointing out how the Scarlet Dancer was dragging a lifeless statue across the floor.

I processed this data against Captain White’s updated primary directive. Protect her. Cherish her. The crowd’s mockery was a hostile variable threatening her social standing and emotional baseline. It was a negative influence. I needed to execute a countermeasure to shield her. Perhaps issue a verbal warning to the nearest cluster of guests to cease their auditory harassment.

Sensing the shift in my muscle tension, Katana raised her head. She released my hand and reached up, her fingers gently brushing the rigid line of my jawline, right below my cheekbone. Her touch was remarkably soft for a Vanguard soldier. She gently guided my face down so my ocular implants aligned directly with her eyes.

The murmuring of the crowd faded into background static.

“It is just you and me,” she whispered, her lips curving into a soft, genuine smile.

I stared down at her, calculating the statistical improbability of her reaction. She was not embarrassed by my failure. The crowd’s derision did not influence her. She was entirely focused on our localized, two-person unit.

“Confirmed,” I stated evenly, my arm remaining securely anchored around her waist as we continued to sway. The schedule designated the next forty-five minutes for mandatory vocal tributes. We were seated at the elevated high table, facing the sea of crimson.

One by one, officers and prominent citizens approached the podium. The data they presented regarding Katana was uniform and highly positive. They praised her combat fluidity, her grace under fire, and her bright presence in the enclave.

When the subject shifted to my operational history, the tone of the auditory feedback altered.

A lieutenant from a localized defense squad took the microphone. “And to Harrison,” he began, a smirk altering his facial symmetry. “The Vanguard’s favorite shield. He’s sturdy. He’s durable. Doesn’t complain. Though, honestly, we were all a little surprised he didn’t rust during the monsoon season. I’m just not sure what Katana is supposed to do with a household appliance. Let’s hope the genetic algorithms don’t expect actual passion, because I’m pretty sure his hardware isn’t wired for it.”

A wave of laughter rippled through the hall.

I cataloged the statements. Appliance. Hardware. Rust. I analyzed them for tactical threats. Finding none, I disregarded the data. My pulse remained at a steady sixty beats per minute. I felt no shame, no humiliation, no anger. I lacked the necessary neural pathways to process social rejection.

Next to me, however, Katana’s biometrics spiked dangerously.

Her respiration hitched. The thermal output of her skin increased. Before the lieutenant could deliver his next punchline, Katana stood abruptly. The heavy, synthetic wood of her chair scraped violently against the floor, a harsh sound that cut through the dampeners.

“That is enough,” she commanded.

Her voice was not loud, but it possessed the sharpened edge of a drawn blade. The three thousand guests fell into immediate, absolute silence. The lieutenant at the podium froze.

Katana’s eyes blazed as she scanned the room. “He has bled for this enclave more times than any of you. He is the Vanguard’s wall, and he is my husband. You will not disrespect him in my presence again.”

She did not wait for an apology or an acknowledgment. She turned, her white dress swishing sharply, and grabbed my hand. Her grip was tight, her muscles rigid with excess adrenaline. “We are leaving, Harrison,” she stated.

“Acknowledged,” I replied, standing in unison.

I matched her pace as she pulled me down from the dais and marched us straight down the center aisle. As we neared the heavy, reinforced doors of the Atrium, the shock of her outburst began to wear off the crowd. Low murmurs filled the vacuum we left behind. My auditory receptors picked up the hushed, mocking whispers of the elite.

Such a waste.

A beautiful girl shackled to a corpse.

He won’t even touch her. He doesn’t know how.

The heavy doors sealed shut behind us with a pneumatic hiss, cutting off the noise.

We stepped out into the pristine, perfectly regulated streets of Pura Terra. The night air was scrubbed and cool. Citizens on the walkways moved at their standard, proper paces, strictly adhering to curfew protocols.

Katana stopped in the shadow of a thoroughfare arch. She let go of my hand and let out a long, heavy exhale, blowing a stray lock of hair out of her face. I monitored her vitals, waiting for her to process her anger.

Instead, her physical tension evaporated. The corners of her mouth twitched. She looked up at me, the rigid Vanguard soldier vanishing, replaced entirely by a sudden, mischievous spike in serotonin.

She winked.

Then, Katana grabbed the heavy, pristine silk of her ceremonial wedding gown and violently ripped a slit straight up the side of her thigh. I registered the destruction of Class-A enclave property, but as the fabric parted, it revealed her footwear. She had not worn the mandated ceremonial heels. She was wearing her heavy, scuffed Vanguard combat boots.

“Tactical modification,” I noted aloud. “Your mobility has increased by forty percent.”

“Exactly,” Katana beamed, bouncing lightly on her toes. “And I’m going to need it. The last one to our new residential unit is on perimeter duty for a month.”

Before I could process the challenge, she launched herself forward, sprinting down the immaculate avenue.

“Wait,” I called out, engaging my fast-twitch muscle fibers.

I chased after her. It was a highly irregular expenditure of stamina. We were running like undisciplined cadets, our heavy boots echoing loudly against the pavement, completely ignoring the strict behavioral codes of the street. Proper citizens stopped and stared in shock as the Scarlet Dancer and the Tin Man blurred past them.

Katana was laughing, the sound ringing bright and clear in the sterile air, her ruined dress billowing behind her like a white flag of surrender to the chaos.

As I closed the distance, easily matching her pace but intentionally remaining just a fraction of a step behind her, I cross-referenced my current actions with Captain White’s primary directive. Make her feel cherished. Make her your world. I concluded that engaging in this illogical, high-speed kinetic pursuit was the optimal strategy to accomplish the mission.

We skidded to a halt, breathless, in front of a standard, geometric housing block designated for newly paired Vanguard units.

“I win,” she gasped, bracing her hands on her knees and looking up at me with a brilliant, triumphant smile.

“Your acceleration was mathematically superior in the final stretch,” I lied smoothly, my own breathing perfectly regulated.

The biometric scanner embedded in the heavy steel door of Residential Unit 404 glowed a faint, standby blue.

I stepped forward and pressed my palm flat against the sensor plate.

“Primary biometric accepted,” a synthesized voice chimed from the overhead speakers. “State vocal designation.”

“Harrison Crone,” I stated, keeping my tone perfectly level.

Katana stepped beside me, resting her hand on the panel. The scanner flashed green. “Katana Royall.”

“Secondary biometric and vocal designation accepted. System locked to current Vanguard units. Welcome home.”

The reinforced door unsealed with a quiet pneumatic hiss, sliding open to reveal our assigned quarters. I stepped inside, my ocular implants automatically scanning the perimeter and cataloging the layout. The space was highly efficient. A centralized living area with modular seating, a compact nutritional prep station, and a secondary door leading to the sleep quarters. Everything was sterile, pristine, and devoid of any personal history. It was a blank slate.

“Lights, twenty percent,” Katana commanded softly as the door sealed itself behind us.

The harsh overhead illumination dimmed to a warm, ambient glow. The adrenaline from our unregulated sprint through the streets was beginning to metabolize out of her system. Her respiration slowed. She walked through the small living space, her fingertips trailing over the smooth, synthetic counters. She was charting her new territory.

I remained by the door, observing.

She turned and walked into the sleep quarters. I followed two paces behind. The room consisted of a standard, temperature-controlled double berth and built-in storage units. Katana stood at the edge of the bed and looked down at her ruined ceremonial gown.

With a quiet sigh, she reached behind her neck and unclasped the fabric. The torn white silk pooled around her heavy combat boots. She stepped out of it, discarding the enclave’s pristine image on the floor, leaving her in her simple, functional undergarments.

She did not move toward the sonic shower. Instead, she turned to me. She stepped into my personal space, her hands reaching up to the high, stiff collar of my white formal tunic. I stood perfectly still, allowing the physical manipulation. Her fingers were deft and practiced, undoing the clasps and pulling the heavy jacket from my shoulders. She discarded it over a chair, then moved to my shirt.

“I am capable of un-equipping my own gear,” I informed her.

“I know,” she murmured, her voice barely above a whisper. Her knuckles brushed against my collarbone as she pulled the shirt away. Her skin was incredibly warm against my regulated baseline temperature.

She finished un-equipping me, leaving my upper torso bare to the cool, scrubbed air of the room. I analyzed the situation. Standard protocol post-ceremony for biological units dictated procreation attempts to fulfill genetic algorithms. I began calculating the necessary physiological responses.

But Katana simply pulled back the heavy thermal blanket and climbed into the berth. She lay on her side, looking up at me expectantly. I bypassed the procreation algorithms and executed Captain White’s primary directive: Make her feel protected. Make her your world.

I climbed onto the mattress and lay down beside her. Katana immediately closed the distance. She shifted her weight, curling her body against my side. She rested her head on my chest, right over my sternum, and draped her arm across my torso. I reacted optimally, wrapping my arm securely around her waist to anchor her in place.

I monitored the metrics. The tactile pressure was firm but not restrictive. Her thermal output was a steady 98.6 degrees. I prepared to initiate my own sleep cycle when Katana shifted again. She tilted her head up, her chin resting on my chest, bringing her face inches from mine. In the dim light, her eyes were dark, searching mine with a profound, quiet intensity.

She leaned in, and pressed her lips to mine.

It was a slow, deliberate contact. A lingering, longing transfer of pressure. I did not compute it as a tactical maneuver or a biological necessity. It was simply... soft.

And then, a system error occurred.

Deep within my chest cavity, specifically centered around the cardiac muscle, a sudden, illogical surge of bio-electricity flared. It was a spark. It was not painful. It was not a neural implant malfunction. It felt like a sudden, violent expansion of pressure inside a hollow space.

My internal monitors flared. My heart rate, which had not deviated from sixty beats per minute in four years, suddenly spiked to seventy-two. Then seventy-six.

I attempted to run a diagnostic. Adrenaline? No. Threat detection? Negative. Spirit interference? Impossible. I possessed no Spirit for the energy to latch onto. The altar had burned all of that away. I was a machine. I was the Tin Man.

Yet, as she kissed me, the spark flared brighter, an anomaly in my cold, dark circuitry that I could not categorize or suppress. Katana finally pulled back. Her breath ghosted across my jaw. She smiled, a soft, contented expression, completely unaware of the massive diagnostic failure she had just triggered within my system.

She settled her head back down against my chest, her breathing slowing into the deep, rhythmic pattern of sleep. I monitored her respiration until it hit the 12-breaths-per-minute threshold of REM sleep.

I did not move. I lay awake in the dim light, my arm locked securely around her, staring at the ceiling. I listened to the quiet hum of the residential unit, and the strange, unfamiliar, elevated thumping of my own heart.

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