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The Deal

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Full book available on Amazon, paperback or Kindle! Everyone at Sherwood High knows Ren Tyler's name. Senior year. Underground bike racer. The guy who makes conversations stop when he walks into a room. Ren doesn't chase his reputation — it follows him, and he intends to keep it that way. His bike is his income, his freedom, and the one thing in his life he trusts completely. Until a new girl scratches it on day one. Liv Grey didn't come to Sherwood looking for trouble. She came with a printed schedule, a plan to keep her head down, and four schools' worth of experience starting over. What she didn't plan for was Ren Tyler, fifteen hundred dollars in damage, and a deal she can't afford to refuse — one month of notes, coffee runs, and no attitude, and they'll call it even. Simple enough. Except nothing about Ren Tyler is simple. While Liv navigates a new school, a new city, and a growing connection with Dan Michaels — the football captain who is everything Ren isn't: warm, easy, uncomplicated — she finds herself being pulled in a direction she didn't choose and can't quite explain. Ren sees more of her than anyone else does. The boxing she hides. The register she saves for gravel yards at midnight. The version of herself she doesn't show Sherwood High. And Liv is starting to see past the reputation too.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

The scratch

Liv

The plan was simple.

Keep your head down. Find your classes. Don’t talk to anyone you don’t have to.

I’d transferred enough times to know the rules. New school, new building, same social ecosystem. The faces change, the hierarchy doesn’t. There’s always a top, always a bottom, and the smartest move on day one is to exist somewhere invisible in the middle until you figure out who’s who.

I had exactly ten minutes before the bell, a schedule printed on paper that was already soft at the fold from how many times I’d opened it, and a parking lot so crowded it felt like everyone at Sherwood High had decided to exist in the same twelve square metres at once.

I adjusted the strap of my crossbody bag, tilted the schedule sideways trying to make sense of the building numbers, and moved.

I was threading between a group of girls who hadn’t noticed me and a gap between two parked cars when my shoulder caught something solid.

The sound that followed stopped me cold.

A scrape. Metallic. Sharp. The kind of sound that doesn’t need context to make your stomach drop.

I went completely still.

No.

I looked up from the schedule slowly, the way you do when some part of your brain is hoping that if you move carefully enough, reality might negotiate with you.

It didn’t.

The motorcycle beside me was black — deeply, deliberately black, the kind of finish that doesn’t happen by accident. Sleek and low and expensive-looking in a way that didn’t need a badge to announce it. And along the side panel, pale against all that perfect dark paint, was a fresh scratch.

My scratch.

Oh no. No. No, no, no—

“Tell me you didn’t just do that.”

The voice came from behind me.

I turned around.

He was already watching me.

Tall, with dark messy hair that fell across his forehead like he hadn’t touched it and somehow that was the point. A black graphic tee worn soft with use, cargo pants, boots. A silver chain at his collarbone and beneath it a cross sitting flat against his chest. His arms were sleeved in tattoos that crept up past his neck, dark ink against tan skin, and he held a helmet loose at his side like it weighed nothing.

He wasn’t looking at the bike yet. He was looking at me.

Dark blue eyes. Not the soft kind. The kind that take inventory.

I recognised him before I even knew his name, because there’s a specific way people look at someone dangerous — careful and wide-eyed, the way you watch something you know better than to touch. Every person in that parking lot was looking at him that way.

His gaze moved from my face to the scratch. Then back. Slow. Deliberate.

And then he smiled.

Not a kind smile. A slow, interested one that sat somewhere between amused and dangerous and made the back of my neck prickle.

“First day here and you already picked a fight with my bike?”

He stepped closer. Not rushed. He didn’t need to rush.

“Interesting.”

He tilted his head, studying me like I was something unexpected he’d found in a familiar place.

“So… what are you going to do about it?”

My eyes went wide before I could stop them. I looked at the scratch again — my scratch, fresh and pale against all that perfect black — and felt the apology climb up my throat before I could shape it into anything useful.

“Oh no. No. No. I’m so sorry—”

He was already crouching beside the bike, running his fingers along the mark with a slowness that felt almost theatrical. Like grief performed for an audience. His jaw shifted — tightened — even as that insufferable flicker of amusement stayed lit in his eyes when he glanced back up at me.

Around us, people had begun to stop.

Not subtly. Fully stop, mid-conversation, turning to watch. Someone pulled out their phone. A cluster of girls near a car bonnet leaned in toward each other, whispering. This was, clearly, the kind of scene people at Sherwood High lived for.

He stood back up.

Crossed his arms.

The black tee pulled across his shoulders, and up close I caught the faint smell of leather and something mechanical — engine oil, or the ghost of it. He looked at me like he was filing my face away for later use.

“Sorry doesn’t fix it, does it?”

I opened my mouth. He kept going.

“You know what this bike means to me? What it’s worth?”

He let the question hang, then tilted his head like something had occurred to him.

“Actually... you know what? I don’t think you do. New girl, right? Nobody warned you about touching Ren Tyler’s bike?”

His tone was conversational. Almost friendly. Which somehow made it worse, because underneath the casual surface was something with edges.

I felt my sympathy curdling.

Yes, I’d scratched his bike. Yes, I felt genuinely awful about it. But the way he was standing there, absorbing the audience, letting the silence stretch for maximum effect — I knew this type. I’d met this type in every school I’d ever been dropped into.

The kind who mistakes fear for respect and calls it the same thing.

“No,” I said. “I don’t know who you are.”

The words came out with more edge than I’d planned, but I didn’t take them back.

“But I’m really sorry about it. I wasn’t careful.” I held his gaze. “I’ll pay you back for the damage. Just give me a few weeks for my next salary.”

The parking lot went silent in a different way than before.

Someone actually gasped.

And for just a second — one unguarded second — genuine surprise moved across his face. His arms dropped slightly. His eyes shifted, recalibrated, like I’d said something in a language he hadn’t been expecting.

Then the mask came back. A different mask than before. Less bored. More focused.

He stepped closer.

“You don’t know who I am.”

He repeated it slowly. Tasted the sentence. Then he laughed — low and short, like it surprised even him.

“And you’re annoyed. At me.”

He leaned in slightly, voice dropping beneath the crowd noise.

“Here’s the thing, new girl. Nobody talks to me like that. Nobody offers to pay me back in a few weeks like I’m some patient guy who takes IOUs.”

He straightened up, hands sliding into his hoodie pockets, that dangerous half-smile settling back into place.

“But since you clearly have no idea what you just walked into... I’ll make you a deal. You work it off.”

I raised an eyebrow.

I didn’t like bullies. I’d never learned how to pretend I did.

“My name’s Liv,” I said, and yes, I heard the condescension in my own voice and let it stay there. “First of all. But probably you don’t care.”

I shifted my bag strap. “I’m sorry — genuinely. But I don’t have the money to give you now.”

I looked at him squarely.

“Let’s hear it then. What’s this ‘deal’?”

I air-quoted with my fingers.

Something moved through his expression — irritation, maybe, the shadow of it — but what settled on his face was sharper than anger. He pulled one hand from his pocket and dragged it back through his dark hair. The silver chain shifted at his throat.

He circled me.

Slowly. One full rotation, boots scraping the asphalt, completely unbothered by the time it took. When he came back around, he was closer than before.

“Liv.”

He said my name like he was field-testing it. Deciding whether it was worth remembering.

“You’ve got an attitude. I’ll give you that. Stupid, but... interesting.”

“Here’s the deal.” His voice dropped. “You’re going to be my personal assistant for the next month. Whatever I need — notes from classes I skip, coffee runs, holding my stuff — you do it. No complaints. No attitude.”

A pause.

“And maybe, just maybe, I’ll consider us even.”

I looked at him.

Took a full second to confirm that yes, he was serious — this was a real offer from a real person using his real mouth.

Then I laughed. Right in his face.

Stepped back, shook my head.

“Forget it. Take my money at the end of the month or fuck off. That’s my deal.”

The parking lot held its breath.

I felt it — that collective inhale, the total stillness — and I understood from the quality of the silence that I had just done something that didn’t happen here.

Ren went completely still.

Not frozen. Still. The specific kind that means someone is deciding something.

The easy amusement left his face entirely. What replaced it was quieter and considerably more focused, and for the first time since I’d turned around, I felt the full weight of what I’d walked into. Not the reputation, not the crowd. Him, specifically — the dark blue eyes, the set of his jaw, the way he occupied space without appearing to try.

Someone whispered “oh shit” loud enough to carry.

He took one slow step toward me, closing the distance I’d made.

“Nobody tells me to fuck off.”

Low. Measured. Not performed.

“You’ve got guts.” The cold smile returned, thinner. “Stupidly suicidal guts.”

He reached into his pocket, unhurried, and turned his phone screen toward me.

A text thread. A custom bike shop. Itemised.

The number at the bottom made my vision briefly white at the edges.

Fifteen hundred dollars.

He slid the phone away.

“Still want to tell me to fuck off, Liv? Or are we going to renegotiate?”

I stared at where his phone had just disappeared.

“What?”

The word came out smaller than I intended.

“You are taking the piss.”

“Sweetheart, that’s actually a generous estimate.” Smooth. Almost pleasant. “I’m not even counting labour costs.”

He leaned back against the bike — his scratched, fifteen-hundred-dollar, custom-paint, hand-polished bike — and let me look at it.

“Every part of it is custom. That paint? Special order. That chrome? Hand-polished. So here’s where we are, Liv. You don’t have fifteen hundred dollars. I’m guessing you don’t have half that. Which means my deal — the one where you work it off — is looking pretty reasonable now, isn’t it?”

He paused.

“Or you can walk away. Tell me to fuck off again. And I’ll report this to the school, file a police report for property damage.”

He said it lightly. Like either outcome suited him fine.

I ran through every option I had. Every angle. Every possible exit from this moment.

Nothing.

Not a single way out that didn’t end with my mum getting a phone call she absolutely could not receive on the first day of her new job, in a new city, where we couldn’t afford another disaster.

I closed my eyes for exactly one second.

Opened them.

“Fine then.”

The words tasted awful.

“How long will this torture last?”

Ren

I almost didn’t go back for the phone.

That’s the part I kept coming back to, later, in the way you turn something over without meaning to. Thirty seconds. If I’d just left it in the bag, I’d have been through the doors before it happened, and she would’ve been nobody — just another new face in the Sherwood High ecosystem that I’d learn to walk past without thinking.

Instead I heard the scrape.

I knew what it was before I’d fully processed the sound. Two years of building that bike from a base I’d sourced myself, of custom orders and garage hours and getting the finish exactly right — that sound lived in a specific place in my chest, and when I heard it, it hit that place directly.

I looked up.

There was a girl standing beside the bike.

Long dark hair, curtain bangs, layered necklaces, a beat-up crossbody bag covered in pins. She was holding a printed schedule. She was staring at the side panel with the precise expression of someone watching their morning fall apart.

She hadn’t seen me yet.

I watched her for a moment — the stillness of her, the way she stood there processing the scratch with her eyes wide and her mouth doing something that was probably a stream of words she hadn’t said aloud. She wasn’t performing panic. She hadn’t clocked the audience yet. There was no audience yet. It was just her and the damage and the silent, horrible arithmetic of it.

That, I registered.

Then I walked toward her and said what I said, and she turned around, and the morning became something else entirely.

I’d had people react to me in most of the ways people react to me.

There were the ones who went immediately deferential — all apologies and dropped eye contact and visible relief when I didn’t push it further. There were the ones who tried to seem unbothered and gave themselves away within thirty seconds. There were the ones who looked to their friends first, gauging how scared they were supposed to be.

She didn’t do any of those things.

She looked at me — directly, specifically, the way people do when they’re not consulting anyone else’s reaction as a reference point — and she apologised. Genuinely, I thought. Not performed contrition, not strategic softness designed to de-escalate. She was actually sorry about the scratch. I could tell because it was the first thing she said and she didn’t dress it up.

And then, in the same breath, she told me she’d pay me back at the end of the month.

The parking lot went sideways.

I laughed. I didn’t plan to. It came out short and real, because the combination of the apology and the practicality and the mild irritation already building in her eyes was so far from what that moment was supposed to look like that my body responded before my brain caught up.

She didn’t know who I was.

I turned that over while the crowd assembled around us the way it always did — drawn by some current I’d long since stopped thinking about consciously. She didn’t know, and she was annoyed, and she was standing in the middle of Sherwood High’s social theatre with absolutely no idea that there was a script everyone else was following.

I made the deal. The reasonable one — a month, small asks, no money changing hands. I watched her absorb it.

She laughed in my face.

Then she told me to fuck off.

In the silence that followed, I took stock.

The crowd was holding its breath in the specific way that meant phones were recording and the story would be around the school before second period. That was fine. That was incidental. What I was paying attention to was her — the way she’d stepped back to create distance after saying it, chin up, waiting for whatever came back at her.

She wasn’t fearless. I’d have clocked fearless; I knew what it looked like and it usually came with something performative underneath. This was different. This was someone who was probably calculating the risk and choosing to hold their ground anyway, which was harder, and rarer, and considerably more interesting.

I closed the distance she’d made.

Kept my voice low, below the crowd, because what I said next wasn’t for them.

I showed her the number from the shop thread — real figures, current quote, nothing inflated. I watched her read it and watched the reality of it land in her face, that brief second where the colour shifted and the word “what” came out small and involuntary before she could catch it.

The “you are taking the piss” that followed, though — that came back with teeth still in it. Diminished, yes. Recalculating, clearly. But not gone.

I laid out the full picture: custom parts, labour, the alternative involving the school and a formal report. I gave her the exits so she could confirm for herself there weren’t any.

And then I waited.

I’d learned a long time ago that what someone does in the silence after they’ve run out of options tells you more about them than anything that came before it. Most people crumbled or pivoted to flattery or tried one last angle that didn’t hold. It was almost choreographed at this point.

She was quiet for a beat.

Then: Fine then.

Clipped. Genuinely reluctant. Not dressed up into anything more palatable than it was.

How long will this torture last?

And there it was — the thing I’d been half-waiting for since she’d turned around and looked at me without flinching. Not acceptance. Not defeat. Something that had swallowed the situation whole and was already, immediately, reframing it as something to be survived on her own terms.

I held her gaze for a second longer than necessary.

“A month,” I said. “Don’t be late.”

I picked up my helmet, checked the chain lock out of habit, and walked toward the building.

I didn’t look back.

I already knew she was watching. And I was already, without entirely meaning to, thinking about what she’d do next.

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