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The Foolish Maidens

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Summary

King Francis lives happily with his family while Deborah and Sandra compete for Prince Shalom’s love. Sandra secretly adds a love potion to his food and tries to bribe the CCTV camera, but the prince discovers her plan. Sandra is summoned and exposed, while the prince later asks her to bring Rhoda to him.

Genre
Drama
Author
ebube
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Once upon a time there lived a king named King Francis. The king was so wealthy and he lived happily with his family. The king had a beautiful wife and a handsome son, and their name were Queen Clara and prince shalom. They lived in luxury .The king family were so kind to the people in the town. They were maidens made specially to serve the kingdom. The name of the maidens were Eunice, Deborah, Sandra, Dora and Rhoda. Deborah and Sandra love the prince but the prince don’t love them. So one day the prince told Sandra to prepare breakfast for him when Deborah heard about this she was so annoyed that it was not her that was sent by the prince so, Sandra was so happy and jumped into the kitchen excitedly, jubilating while preparing the food mean while she has visited a herbalist which gave her a portion of love which if taken by the prince would fall in love with Sandra. Foolishly Sandra taught she could bribe the CCTV by placing a certain amount of money on the camera when she placed it she then put the portion given to her in the food and she taught she had bribed the camera from viewing her and she left to give the prince .when Rhoda went to meet the prince and asked him if he needed anything. When he looked up at Rhoda he was lost in her because of her beauty. The prince never trusted Sandra because of her behavior towards him, since when she lodged in the palace so he decided to review in his TV how Sandra prepared the meal .when he saw exactly how Sandra had added the portion in his food he was traumatized and he took it to show his parent. Then the king summoned Sandra to his presence. Sandra was so happy because she thought that the prince sent for because her food was so delicious and wanted to assign her to be preparing his meal for him. When Sandra came they showed everything the camera has captured while she was in the kitchen. In her thoughts she instigated to abuse camera. They left her alone in the camera chamber. After a while she went into the kitchen and started insulting the camera declaring “you stupid camera and useless thing so the money I gave you was not enough right”. When she realized that the money she kept there was missing she said to the camera you are a cheater mean while it was Deborah who carried the money. She checked every cranny and corner of the kitchen but she could not find it. Deborah saw that she was looking for the money and then said my beautiful friend if you want your money, can you please leave the prince for me you are stealing him from. Deborah said God forbid will I do that. In fact I dash you the money don’t give me the money again use the money and buy toothpaste and brush you stinking mouth that stinks like that of a dead rat. Sorry I already know it hurts you badly so don’t bother yourself telling me. The prince then called Sandra. Sandra was happy when she heard that prince had summoned her. Then the prince said to Sandra “please can you call Rhoda for me” Sandra then replied “ok my handsome prince". Sandra went out to the piazza and began to call out to Rhoda out-piercing” Rhoda, Rhoda ooooo where’s this girl ha! I am tired ooooo and is the prince that sent me.

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