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INOCENCIA

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En un mundo en guerra viven dos niños con sus hermanitos pequeños que sobrevivieron a la catástrofe que mato a su familia. Uno de ellos decide ir a buscar comida a una ciudad cercana y al paso de los años no regresa. La niña en su soledad decide esperarle durante años. Cómo la esperanza nos guía a seguir luchando por la supervivencia. Cómo la brutalidad y violencia provocada por decisiones de las autoridades puede provocar tanto daño incluso en los niños que se esfuerzan por salír adelante.

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20h ago
Chapters
1
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n/a
Age Rating
13+

Capítulo 1

Capítulo I 

(primer avance de borrador)

—No te vayas, por favor no te vayas— Susurré mientras dejaba las lágrimas atravesar mis sucias mejillas.

— Se lo llevaron todo, no puedo perderte ahora... No— dije más fuerte mirándolo a los ojos. Éramos solo dos niños, sobreviviendo a un mundo que no da espacio para crecer.

Me miró, observó la casa, destruida, los escombros de lo que ellos se llevaron.

—No hay futuro aquí, buscaré una salida, te lo prometo... Volveré— Dijo hacia mí.

Lo miré a los ojos, y acaricié suavemente sus dorados cabellos que apenas se distinguían entre la suciedad, en su mirada madura observé un dolor tan pesado también aquella inocencia de un niño que busca una salida imposible en las promesas que alguna vez plantaron allí, ¿Hasta qué punto llega la esperanza? Me pregunté.

(Continuará)

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