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The Mystical Adventure

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Summary

Introduction:- This story is of family of 4 • Father (Bill):- He is a really caring and father but also a busy doctor, even on holidays he goes to hospital for his patients • Mother (Martha):- She is a housewife, loves her children's but she is really strict • Son (Jack):- He is kind, intelligent and brave kid who really likes to travell around the world • Daughter (julie):- She is a curious girl who gets scared easily but still likes to checkout things even though she might cry out of fear . It has total of 5 chapters in part 1. Where 1st chapter is about Jack and Julie demanding to go on a trip and conveying thier parent's to buy a farmhouse somewhere near mountains. Chapter 2 is about them eventually finding one perfect match which has a farmhouse and the property includes a lake and a mountain too, but the only problem is that it's in a really secluded area. Chapter 3 is about them exploring about the area exploring that their is something wrong or suspicious in that area, chapter 4 "NOT JULIE" is about something happening to Julie while exploring the mountain. Chapter 5 is about Jack going into the mountain to find Julie, but the things he saw was really disturbing, Julie got soo shocked that she couldn't say a word . Later on Julie told similar things that Jack saw in the mountain,But Jack said it's just a nightmare, but deep down knew that it wasn't really a dream

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

"We're going, no matter what"

CHAPTER-1 "We're going, no matter what"


Jack leaned forward, frustrated. "Dad , it's been year's since we had our last family trip together."

After a second, Jack frowned, his voice rising. “I want to go! It’s been four damn years since we last went on a vacation!”

Before Bill could say a word, Julie jumped in. “Yes! Jack is right for the first time. I, too, am just so done with this boring life at home. Now I want a vacation, no matter what!”

Bill smiled, looking at both of his children. “Oh, so you guys have started working together.” He laughed. “So, where do you guys want to go?”

Martha glared at Bill. “Why do you always listen to them?” she snapped. “No, we are not going anywhere. You two, go to your bedrooms and study!”

Martha, too, longed for a vacation. She was tired of the same routine every day. But the family was saving money to buy a farmhouse, and she knew that an expensive trip could set them back. She couldn’t herself to spend money when they were so close to achieving something they had been planning for a long time.

Jack and Julie exchanged a glance. Then, as if they had the exact same thought, their eyes lit up.

“We could buy a farmhouse somewhere in the hills!” they exclaimed together. “You’d get your farmhouse, and we’d get our vacation!”

Bill and Martha looked at each other and exchanged a smile.

“Okay, fine,” they said together.

Jack and Julie froze for a second, barely believing what they had just heard. Then they screamed with excitement. They jumped up, high-fived each other, and started dancing around the room, laughing and cheering.

“We’re going on a vacation!” Jack shouted.

“And we’re getting a farmhouse!” Julie yelled, jumping up and down.

The two of them danced around the room like they had just won the lottery, their faces glowing with pure excitement.

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