Maravillas

Sheila Chasteen: Thank for this beautiful story of love, family and devotion .I loved all of the different characters. You brought them all to life. I hated to see it end. Maybe there will be a part 2??I would love to know what happens next. 💕💕💕

Mokatoka: Say what????? God! Is it over???

Mary Wilkins: This was an enjoyable short story. Well done! 😄👏🏾👏🏾

Dee: I'm enjoying this read immensely. I would recommend this to readers who enjoy suspenseful romance. At this point, I can't find a reason to rate less. Can't wait to see how the story plays out.

klsgal61: Loved this book, great story of the two, Barbara & Alastor

Happiness Aghogho: I love this.... so thrilling. Looking forward to the end

Pav: Well written and enticing, love your style, keep up with good work.

Danielle: Great writing

jo987_123: This is a good story, but it needs a good editor to go through this iteration and fix the mistakes. The pov changes from 1st person to 3rd person, often, and sometimes within one sentence. It needs a liberal sprinkling of punctuation marks throughout, and a decision needs to be made about the char...