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The House Forgot To Let Me Leave

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Summary

The house had been empty for eleven years. At least, that’s what Ethan was told. Desperate for a fresh start, Ethan moves into a cheap, abandoned house at the end of a forgotten road. But on his first night, he hears footsteps upstairs. Then three knocks come from behind a locked bedroom door. By midnight, the front door locks itself. Ethan discovers messages carved into the walls, photographs of people who mysteriously disappeared, and evidence that someone—or something—has been watching the house for years. The deeper he searches, the more terrifying the truth becomes. The house isn’t haunted. It’s hungry. And Ethan isn’t its first victim. He might be its last.

Status
4d ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1 The Lock Turned Itself

The house had been empty for eleven years.

At least, that was what the realtor told me.

I remember staring at it from the driver’s seat, wondering why anyone would build a house so far from everything. There wasn’t another home for nearly half a mile. No streetlights. No sidewalks. Just a narrow road disappearing between rows of dead trees.

The house stood at the end of it.

Three stories.

Black shutters.

A porch that sagged toward the ground.

And windows so dark they looked less like glass and more like empty holes.

I should have kept driving.

Instead, I turned off the engine.

For several seconds, I just sat there.

Rain tapped against the windshield.

“One night,” I whispered.

That’s all I needed.

I had been driving for almost six hours, trying to get away from my old life. I didn’t have much money left, and when I found the listing online, the price seemed almost too good to be real.

A three-story house for practically nothing.

The listing said it needed work.

It didn’t mention the smell.

The moment I opened the front door, I smelled something old.

Not mold.

Not dust.

Something sweeter.

Something rotten underneath the sweetness.

I stepped inside.

The realtor had left the key beneath a loose stone beside the porch.

I locked the car and carried my bags inside.

The front door groaned as I pushed it open.

“Hello?”

My voice traveled through the house.

Then it came back.

But not quite right.

“Hello?”

I froze.

The echo sounded like it had come from upstairs.

I laughed nervously.

“Great.”

I dropped my bags beside the staircase.

The inside of the house was surprisingly clean. Dust covered most of the furniture, but the floors were free of dirt. There were old photographs hanging on the walls.

Family photographs.

A man.

A woman.

Two children.

They all stood in front of the same house.

The same house I was standing inside.

I moved closer to one of the pictures.

The faces had been scratched out.

Every single one.

I touched the frame.

Something moved upstairs.

A slow creak.

Then another.

I looked toward the ceiling.

“Hello?”

Nothing.

I waited.

Another creak.

This time, directly above me.

I grabbed my phone and turned on the flashlight.

The battery was at 18%.

Perfect.

I walked toward the staircase.

Halfway up, I noticed something carved into the wooden railing.

Three words.

DON’T GO UP.

I stared at them.

Someone had carved the letters deeply into the wood.

I should have listened.

Instead, I went upstairs.

The second floor was darker than the first.

There were six doors.

Five were open.

One was closed.

I walked past the open rooms first.

An empty bedroom.

A bathroom with a cracked mirror.

A child’s room with a broken wooden bed.

Then I reached the closed door.

I could hear something behind it.

Breathing.

Slow.

Deep.

I stood completely still.

The breathing stopped.

My hand hovered over the doorknob.

“Who’s there?”

Nothing.

I slowly turned the knob.

Locked.

I stepped backward.

Then I heard three knocks.

From the other side.

Knock.

Knock.

Knock.

I ran downstairs.

I didn’t stop until I was standing in the kitchen.

My heart was pounding.

I told myself it was pipes.

Old houses made strange noises.

That’s all.

I grabbed a bottle of water and sat at the kitchen table.

For the next hour, nothing happened.

Eventually, I started feeling stupid.

I unpacked a few things, ordered pizza, and turned on the television.

Normal.

I needed normal.

By midnight, I had almost convinced myself that the house wasn’t as creepy as it seemed.

Then the television turned off.

The room went completely silent.

I looked at the remote.

It was sitting on the table.

I hadn’t touched it.

“Okay…”

I stood up.

The front door was only a few feet away.

I figured I’d check the lock.

I didn’t know why.

Maybe I just wanted to make sure everything was secure.

I walked over.

The deadbolt was locked.

I reached for the handle.

Then—

Click.

I stopped.

The deadbolt turned.

By itself.

Slowly.

I watched the metal lock rotate from locked to unlocked.

My hand wasn’t touching it.

I stepped backward.

The door didn’t move.

Then the deadbolt turned again.

Click.

Locked.

I stared at it.

My breathing became shallow.

“No.”

The house was silent.

Then something whispered behind me.

“Stay.”

I spun around.

Nothing.

The kitchen was empty.

I grabbed my phone and turned on the flashlight.

“Who’s there?”

No answer.

I rushed toward the front door.

I grabbed the handle.

Pulled.

Nothing.

I pulled harder.

The door wouldn’t open.

I tried the deadbolt.

Locked.

I unlocked it.

Pulled again.

Nothing.

I checked the handle.

It wasn’t jammed.

I unlocked it again.

Pulled.

Still nothing.

Then I heard footsteps.

Behind me.

Slow footsteps crossing the kitchen floor.

Step.

Step.

Step.

I couldn’t move.

The footsteps stopped directly behind me.

A cold breath touched the back of my neck.

I closed my eyes.

Then the whisper came again.

This time, much closer.

“You shouldn’t have come back.”

My eyes opened.

I turned around.

There was nobody there.

But on the kitchen table was something that hadn’t been there before.

A photograph.

I slowly walked toward it.

My hands shook as I picked it up.

It was a picture of the house.

The same house.

The same porch.

The same windows.

But there was something different.

Someone was standing in the upstairs window.

A woman.

She was staring directly at the camera.

I turned the photograph over.

There was writing on the back.

Five words.

YOU ARE NOT THE FIRST.

I dropped the photograph.

Behind me, the front door slowly unlocked itself.

Click.

I looked at it.

For the first time that night, I understood something.

The house wasn’t trying to keep me out.

It was trying to keep me in.

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