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THE WIDOW VANE

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Summary

In the forest surrounding a small American town, there is a legend of a witch who is said to roam the woods seeking revenge. Suddenly, a series of strange disappearances begins, and a group of friends join forces to solve the mystery.

Status
Complete
Chapters
12
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

PROLOGUE THE FIRST KNOCK

Long before anyone called her a legend, before the children of Dale Hills whispered her name at pyjama parties and dared one another to venture beyond the edge of the woods after dark, there was only a woman and a rope.

The forest had always framed the little town like a courtroom: a dense stand of black pines whose shadows seemed glued together, old maples with bark like scar tissue, ravines that held onto the cold even in July. The town stood in the midst of all that wilderness like something temporary, like the flame of a candle.

In 1881, when the winter had proved so harsh that the river had frozen over completely and the men had begun to turn to God with frightened and angry voices, they dragged Hannah Vane into those woods.

Or at least, that was the story that had been passed down.

The elders said she had lived alone in a cabin north of Miller’s Creek, where brambles climbed up the porch railings and crows gathered on the roof in such numbers that people would cross themselves. Some swore she was a healer. Others claimed she dealt in curses, roots dug from graves and prayers recited backwards. One man, so drunk he laughed at his own lies, once claimed that his grandfather had seen her walking barefoot through the snow, leaving no footprints behind her.

But no one seemed to agree on what Hannah Vane had actually done… only on what had been done to her.

Apparently, those men blamed her for ruining the crops, for making the milk in the buckets turn sour, and for stealing children from their cradles. It was also said that she laughed as they bound her wrists with wire and led her, by lantern light, into the cave north of Dale Hills. They said she had begged, that she had cursed them, that the rope had snapped her neck clean through. Others, however, claimed the opposite.

In the town, the story had always been told through versions shaped by guilt.

What never changed was the ending.

Before she died, Hannah Vane promised that the woods would remember.

For nearly a century and a half, the people of Dale Hills have passed on this story just as those who are afraid tell themselves anything just to be able to sleep. They treated it as a fairy tale, as a local curiosity… as a moral lesson they no longer fully understood. It had become something for tourists in October, for students in car parks, for elderly ladies folding church leaflets whilst the rain pattered against the stained-glass windows.

Then Deputy Sheriff Sebastian Bell disappeared. And suddenly, the story wasn’t quite so fascinating anymore.

On the night he vanished, Dale Hills was enveloped in that kind of calm that only small towns can offer: not a peaceful stillness, but an atmosphere of anticipation.

At around 00:17, Sebastian was standing near the police station, smoking a cigarette and staring down the length of Holly Street. The wind was as sharp as a blade. It crept under his collar and beneath his badge, making his bad knee ache – the one that had once been struck by a van door.

The streetlights hummed. The diner was sinking into darkness, and the florist’s had been closed for an hour already. Beyond the last row of buildings, the forest began abruptly… a wall of tree trunks and shadows so dense that it seemed less like a woodland and more like a gateway to another world.

It was then that he heard it.

A knock at the door.

KNOCK

The deputy sheriff frowned and glanced over his shoulder towards the station door.

Nothing.

Then it happened again.

KNOCK… KNOCK

It wasn’t coming from behind him. It was coming from across the road.

Sebastian narrowed his eyes to make out the sign at the start of the path, near the edge of the village – the one painted years ago in cheerful white letters: WELCOME TO THE DALE HILLS NATURE RESERVE. In daylight it looked picturesque, but at that hour it seemed deserted.

There was something standing there beside it.

At first he thought it was a woman, then that it was a coat left hanging on a post.

Then that thing moved. ‘Who’s there?’ shouted Deputy Sheriff Sebastian Bell.

The figure did not reply. It simply stood there, tall, slender and somehow out of place, as if its limbs bent according to rules belonging to older, darker times. Meanwhile, the wind lifted what appeared to be a lock of hair. Or dangling roots… or strips of fabric.

The man’s fingers tightened around the cigarette. ‘The town hall’s closed,’ he said aloud. ‘Do you need any help?’

A voice reached his ears – thin, cold and terribly close, even though the figure hadn’t moved.

You let them forget me.

The cigarette slipped from Sebastian’s hand, falling onto the pavement. Then he took a step back.

The figure tilted its head and, at that very moment, the deputy sheriff noticed that its neck was bent at an angle that no living creature could possibly sustain.

By dawn, Sebastian Bell had vanished.

His estate car was parked near the start of the path, with both doors open and the engine still running. The torch lay in the mud, its beam pointing towards the woods. Thirty metres beyond the road, someone had nailed a wire noose to a pine tree, at the height of a man’s throat.

No trace of blood.

No footprints.

No body.

Just that rusty wire.

And that feeling, spreading from house to house in Dale Hills, that the town had attracted attention.

Once again.

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