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The Golden-Antlered Deer

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Summary

They came to the mountains to camp. They never expected to become prey. Mount Puntang was supposed to be nothing more than a weekend escape from the noise of everyday life. But when Arga follows a golden-antlered deer deep into the forbidden forests of the Malabar mountains, he discovers something that was never meant to be found—a hidden cannabis plantation, a secret production facility, and a group of men willing to kill to protect their secret. Now eight teenagers are trapped deep within the mountains. Hunted by armed men. Surrounded by wild predators. Haunted by fear. And slowly, they begin to realize that something far older than human cruelty is watching them from beyond the mist. As their friends begin to disappear one by one, a terrifying question emerges: Are they trying to escape the forest—or is the forest deciding who deserves to leave? In a place where humanity entered without permission, every step comes with a price. And the legend of the golden-antlered deer was never just a legend.

Status
4h ago
Chapters
11
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

PROLOGUE : The Deer Behind the Mist

The rain had been falling for three days.

It had soaked the Malabar mountains until the earth could no longer hold any more water. Streams that were usually little more than narrow lines between the rocks had swollen overnight, carrying leaves and broken branches down the slopes. The trails had disappeared beneath layers of mud, and a pale mist had settled between the trees.

The forest seemed to have withdrawn into itself.

There were no distant voices.

No motorcycles.

No laughter from hikers.

Only the rain.

And beneath it, the occasional sound of something moving through the trees.

An old man walked alone.

He moved slowly, leaning on a wooden stick with one hand. His clothes were already damp, and his boots sank slightly into the soft ground with every step.

He had no good reason to be there.

At least, not one he could explain easily.

He had lived near the mountain for most of his life. He knew its trails, its streams, its slopes, and the places where the forest became too dense for ordinary people to enter.

He also knew the stories.

Every village had them.

Some stories were meant to frighten children.

Others were told to keep people away from places they had no business entering.

And some stories...

Some stories survived because nobody had ever been brave enough to prove them wrong.

The old man stopped walking.

Something was different.

He listened.

Rainwater dripped from the leaves above him.

One drop.

Then another.

But beneath the rain, there was something else.

A faint rustling.

The old man slowly turned his head.

Nothing.

He waited.

The sound came again.

Closer.

A branch snapped somewhere beyond the mist.

His fingers tightened around the wooden stick.

“Who’s there?”

His voice sounded strangely small beneath the enormous trees.

No one answered.

The old man took another step.

Then he saw it.

At first, it was only a shape between the trees.

Brown.

Still.

Almost impossible to distinguish from the wet trunks and shadows surrounding it.

Then the animal moved into a patch of pale light.

A deer.

The old man stopped breathing for a moment.

He had seen deer before.

But never one like this.

Its body was larger than he expected, its coat carrying a strange golden-brown sheen beneath the gray morning light.

And its antlers—

The old man stared.

They were enormous.

Wide and elegant, rising above its head like branches of an ancient tree.

For a moment, they seemed almost golden.

The deer looked directly at him.

The old man felt something cold move down his spine.

A memory returned to him.

His father’s voice.

A story told beside a small fire many decades ago.

There was, his father had said, a deer that lived somewhere deep within the Malabar forest.

A deer with antlers unlike those of any ordinary animal.

Some called it a blessing.

Some called it a warning.

And his father had always ended the story the same way.

If you ever see it, do not follow.

The old man had laughed when he first heard it.

He had been young.

Young people often believed that everything older than themselves was superstition.

But now he was standing in front of the creature his father had warned him about.

The deer lowered its head.

Then turned.

It disappeared between the trees.

The old man remained where he was.

He should have gone home.

Instead, after a long moment, he followed.

Not quickly.

He moved carefully, placing each foot on the wet ground as quietly as he could.

The mist became thicker.

The forest grew darker.

The deer was no longer visible, but the old man continued forward.

Then he saw something that had nothing to do with the animal.

A footprint.

A boot print pressed deeply into the mud.

He crouched.

Fresh.

He looked around.

Another footprint appeared several feet away.

Then another.

There were several sets.

The tracks continued toward a part of the mountain he knew people rarely visited.

A place the villagers avoided.

The old man slowly stood.

The rain continued to fall.

He followed the tracks.

Not because he wanted to.

Because he had already gone too far to pretend he had seen nothing.

The trees opened slightly ahead.

Beyond them was a clearing.

And in that clearing were rows of plants.

The old man stopped.

His eyes widened.

He recognized them.

Cannabis.

Not a few plants hidden among ordinary vegetation.

Hundreds.

Perhaps more.

They had been planted deliberately beneath the forest canopy, protected from view by the surrounding trees.

The old man took a slow step backward.

Then he heard a sound.

An engine.

He turned toward it.

Through the trees, several men appeared.

They carried large sacks and moved with the confidence of people who knew the mountain well.

One of them looked around before disappearing behind a rocky slope.

The old man remained hidden.

He waited.

Then he saw something that made his stomach tighten.

A structure had been built against the mountainside.

It was almost invisible from a distance.

Vegetation covered much of its exterior. The surrounding rocks concealed the rest.

But there was no mistaking it now.

A building.

Deep inside the forest.

The old man watched as several men entered and left through a narrow opening.

He could hear machinery.

Metal striking metal.

Voices.

Boxes being dragged across a floor.

The place was not abandoned.

It was operating.

Whatever was happening there had been carefully hidden from the outside world.

The old man took another step backward.

His heel touched a branch.

Crack.

Every sound inside the building stopped.

The old man froze.

A voice shouted from somewhere beyond the trees.

He did not wait to hear what it said.

He ran.

Branches struck his face.

Mud slipped beneath his boots.

His breathing became ragged as he pushed himself through the forest.

Behind him, he heard movement.

Several people.

Coming after him.

He ran faster.

Then he stopped.

A low growl came from somewhere ahead.

The old man’s body went rigid.

Between the trees stood a black panther.

It was almost invisible in the darkness beneath the canopy.

Only its eyes could be clearly seen.

The old man stared.

The panther stared back.

For several seconds, neither moved.

Then the animal slowly turned its head.

The old man followed its gaze.

Through the mist, farther between the trees, stood the deer.

The golden-antlered deer.

It was watching him.

And beside it—

Something else.

A figure.

Tall.

Motionless.

The rain blurred its outline, but the shape was unmistakably human.

The old man narrowed his eyes.

For a moment, he thought he could see long hair.

Something around the waist.

Something metallic catching the weak light.

He blinked.

The mist shifted.

The figure disappeared.

So did the deer.

The panther was gone.

The forest was empty.

Only the rain remained.

The old man stood there for several seconds, unable to move.

Then he turned and ran again.

He never told the villagers everything he had seen that day.

Perhaps because he knew they would laugh.

Perhaps because he feared what might happen if the wrong people heard about the hidden facility.

Or perhaps because there are some things that become more frightening when spoken aloud.

Forty years later, the mountain was still standing.

The forest had changed in places.

New trails had appeared.

Old paths had disappeared.

People came and went.

Some came to hike.

Some came to camp.

Some came simply because they wanted to escape the noise of the city for a few days.

Most never ventured far enough to discover what waited beyond the familiar trails.

That weekend, eight young people arrived at Mount Puntang.

They came with heavy backpacks, too much food, cheap jokes, loud laughter, and the confidence of people who believed they knew exactly what kind of adventure they were about to have.

For them, the mountain was nothing more than a weekend escape.

A few days away from school.

A chance to spend time together.

A chance to make memories.

The forest welcomed them without saying anything.

Arga was the first to notice how quiet it had become.

He stood a short distance from the others, adjusting the strap of his backpack.

Someone behind him was arguing about where the tents should be placed.

Another was complaining about the food.

Someone laughed loudly.

The ordinary noise of friendship filled the clearing.

Arga smiled.

Then something moved between the trees.

He turned.

At first, he saw nothing.

He waited.

There.

A flash of brown.

He narrowed his eyes.

Something had moved behind the mist.

Arga stepped closer.

The animal emerged slowly from between the trees.

A deer.

He stared.

There was something strange about it.

Something beautiful.

Its coat seemed to carry a faint golden glow beneath the pale light.

And its antlers were unlike anything Arga had ever seen.

Large.

Elegant.

Almost golden.

The deer looked directly at him.

Arga forgot about his friends.

Forgot about the campsite.

Forgot about everything else.

For a moment, there was only the animal and the forest.

Then the deer turned.

It walked deeper into the trees.

Arga hesitated.

He knew he should go back.

Instead, he followed.

Only a few steps.

Then a few more.

The voices behind him became quieter.

The trees grew closer together.

The trail beneath his feet became less familiar.

Arga stopped.

He looked back.

The campsite was barely visible now.

Mist had begun to gather between the trees.

He should have returned.

But something caught his attention.

A footprint.

Not a deer track.

A boot.

Freshly pressed into the mud.

Arga crouched.

Then he saw another.

And another.

Several sets of footprints disappeared into the forest ahead.

His smile vanished.

Somewhere beyond the trees, he heard a faint metallic sound.

Then a voice.

Too distant to understand.

Arga slowly stood.

The forest seemed different now.

The same trees.

The same mist.

The same rainwater dripping from the leaves.

Yet something had changed.

Or perhaps he had simply begun to notice it.

He looked toward the place where the deer had disappeared.

For a brief moment, he thought he saw its antlers through the mist.

Golden.

Still.

Watching.

Then they vanished.

Arga remained alone between the trees.

He did not know where the deer had gone.

He did not know who had left the footprints.

And he certainly did not know what waited beyond the forest.

But somewhere deep inside Mount Puntang, something had already noticed that he was there.

The forest had been quiet for a very long time.

Now, it was listening.

And Arga had just stepped into the part of the mountain where being seen was not always the same as being safe.

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