Customize readability
Aa

The Girl Who Received Tomorrow

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

Eliora’s life changes when she receives a message from an unknown number warning her not to take the bus the next morning. She ignores it—until the bus crashes. From that moment, the messages keep coming. They predict things that haven’t happened yet, reveal secrets nobody should know, and slowly lead Eliora toward a mysterious boy named Noah. Then she receives the message that changes everything: “Don’t fall in love with him.” But Noah is hiding a secret of his own. Because while Eliora is receiving messages about tomorrow… Noah is receiving messages about her. As the mystery deepens, Eliora must discover who is sending the messages, why they know her future, and whether some futures are meant to be changed—or simply survived. Because sometimes, the future doesn’t send a warning. It sends a person. See

Status
1d ago
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

THE MESSAGE

The first message arrived at 11:47 p.m.

Eliora was lying on her bed, staring at the ceiling while rain tapped against her bedroom window.

She had been trying to sleep for almost an hour.

It wasn’t working.

Her phone was beside her pillow.

She wasn’t expecting anyone to text her.

So when the screen suddenly lit up, she almost ignored it.

Almost.

She reached for the phone.

UNKNOWN NUMBER

Eliora frowned.

She opened the message.

There was only one sentence.

DON’T GET ON THE BUS TOMORROW.

She stared at it.

Then laughed.

“What?”

She checked the number.

No name.

No profile picture.

Nothing.

She typed:

Who is this?

She waited.

Nothing.

She tried again.

How did you get my number?

Still nothing.

Eliora tossed the phone onto the bed.

“People are strange.”

She turned off the light.

Five minutes later, another notification appeared.

She reluctantly picked up the phone.

A second message.

I’M NOT JOKING.

Her smile disappeared.

She sat up.

The rain became louder.

She looked at the time.

11:53 p.m.

“Who are you?”

The three dots appeared.

Someone was typing.

Eliora waited.

The message arrived.

Someone who knows what happens tomorrow.

Her heart skipped.

She stared at the screen.

Then another message appeared.

You have six minutes.

“Six minutes for what?”

No response.

Five minutes.

Four.

Three.

Eliora’s fingers tightened around the phone.

Then the final message arrived.

At 11:59, look outside your window.

She slowly turned toward the window.

Her curtains were closed.

She didn’t move.

11:57.

11:58.

11:59.

Eliora swallowed.

She reached for the curtain.

Pulled it open.

The street outside was empty.

Rain fell beneath the yellow glow of the streetlights.

Nothing.

She sighed.

“Stupid prank.”

Then she noticed something.

Across the street.

A boy was standing beneath an umbrella.

Eliora had never seen him before.

He wasn’t moving.

He wasn’t looking at his phone.

He was looking directly at her window.

Her heart began pounding.

Then her phone vibrated.

She looked down.

One final message.

DON’T LET HIM SEE YOU.

Eliora looked back at the boy.

Too late.

He lowered his umbrella.

Their eyes met.

And he smiled.

Not a friendly smile.

A smile that made her blood run cold.

Then he disappeared into the darkness.

Eliora stepped away from the window.

Her phone vibrated again.

She almost didn’t want to look.

But she did.

The message contained only five words.

HE KNOWS YOU REMEMBER.

Eliora’s breath caught.

“Remember what?”

The room suddenly went dark.

And somewhere outside her house…

a bus horn sounded.

At midnight.

There was no bus route on her street.

Eliora stood frozen in the darkness.

Then her phone lit up one more time.

TOMORROW HAS ALREADY BEGUN.

Let Crystal know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

0

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

Further Recommendations

Silver's Second Chance

Beth Willyoung: This is definitely a great site all the rest make you read and pay this one is the most legitimate site.

Read Now
Crowned in Blood: Fated to the enemy

Happiness Aghogho: I love this.... so thrilling. Looking forward to the end

Read Now
The zatorian

jo987_123: This is a good story, but it needs a good editor to go through this iteration and fix the mistakes. The pov changes from 1st person to 3rd person, often, and sometimes within one sentence. It needs a liberal sprinkling of punctuation marks throughout, and a decision needs to be made about the char...

Read Now
The Easter Bunny

Mia: Really nice story

Read Now
SECRET BILLIONAIRE

Jkind12: Very enjoyable!

Read Now
An Irish Match

armirrenz: Story is great! It catches your interest in reading. Very good book

Read Now
Alpha’s Claim

Read4Free16: Devotion, strength and trust all in creating a wonderful read

Read Now
Beyond the Ice Wall

Sharon: Kept my interest throughout the chapters. ❤

Read Now
Light at the End of the Track

virgie: Sweetest love story of all times. Loved the self- discovery for Beth and Ryder. Loved the corrective emotional experience Beth had with her new friends. Noah was a bundle of joy.

Read Now