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The Call at 2:17

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Summary

Every night at exactly 2:17 AM, someone receives a call containing the details of a murder that hasn't happened yet. When journalist Ethan Cole receives one from his own number, he hears a terrified woman named Maya Vale—and a countdown to her death. He finds her location. He finds the warning. Then he hears his own voice from the future telling him one thing: **Don't save her.** Now Ethan has hours to discover who is making the calls—and why his future self wants Maya to die.

Genre
Thriller
Author
sunriser
Status
1d ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

The Call at 2:17

The phone lit up at exactly 2:17 AM.

Ethan Cole stared at the screen from his pillow, suddenly wide awake.

His own name was displayed beneath the caller ID.

His own personal cell number.

He sat up slowly as the phone continued ringing on the nightstand.

“Why would I be calling myself?”

His thumb hovered over the screen.

Every instinct told him to ignore it.

Instead, he swiped.

“Hello? Who is this?”

At first, there was only a low hiss, like an open line somewhere underground.

Then a woman’s voice screamed through the speaker.

“Please! Please, I’ll do anything! Just don’t hurt me!”

Ethan pulled the phone away from his ear.

The woman sobbed.

Footsteps crossed concrete. A distant siren faded somewhere outside. Beneath it all came a heavy rumble, like a train passing underground.

Then a flat, synthetic voice cut through the noise.

“Fourteen. Seventeen. Hours.”

The woman screamed once more.

A heavy thud followed.

Then footsteps retreated.

Silence.

The call ended.

Ethan stood beside his bed, staring at the screen.

Thirty-one seconds.

A voicemail notification appeared beneath the call.

He pressed play.

The same desperate plea filled the room.

The footsteps.

The siren.

The strange countdown.

He replayed it.

Then again.

On the fourth pass, something caught his attention.

Just before the footsteps reached the woman, her voice came through the static.

“My name is Maya! My name is Maya Vale!”

Ethan stopped the recording.

“Maya Vale.”

He stared at the glowing phone.

“You gave me your name so someone would find you.”

He checked the timestamp.

Exactly 2:17 AM.

“Fourteen hours and seventeen minutes.”

He looked at the clock.

“2:17 PM.”

A countdown.

Maya Vale was alive.

And someone wanted him to know it.

Ethan crossed to his desk and opened his laptop. He worked in media and had spent enough time cleaning interview recordings to know how much information could hide beneath noise.

He transferred the voicemail and replayed the background.

Traffic.

A distant horn.

The low vibration of a subway.

He isolated the sounds and compared them against a city map.

The subway narrowed the location to the Blue Line corridor.

The horn suggested the recording had been made east of the river.

Then, buried beneath the traffic, he heard something else.

A bus announcement.

He boosted the audio.

Played it again.

“Ashland.”

Ethan froze.

“Ashland.”

He checked the map.

“Ashland and Division.”

Fourteen blocks north of his apartment.

He grabbed his phone and searched Maya Vale.

A social profile appeared.

A woman in her late twenties smiled at the camera beneath a rooftop full of city lights.

Her latest post was only three hours old.

A caption about insomnia and good coffee.

“You’re awake right now,” Ethan whispered.

He stared at her photograph.

“You have no idea what’s coming.”

He put the phone down.

“Okay, Maya Vale. I know your name. I know where it happens. And I know when.”

He reached for his jacket.

Then the laptop made a sound.

Ethan turned.

A small notification blinked across the audio software.

SECONDARY WAVEFORM DETECTED.

He frowned.

“What is that?”

He zoomed in.

A second audio layer sat beneath the original recording.

Thin.

Compressed.

Almost invisible.

It had been there the entire time.

Ethan isolated it.

Static hissed through the speakers.

Then a voice emerged.

His voice.

But not his voice now.

It sounded older.

Rougher.

Exhausted.

“Whatever you do…”

Ethan stopped breathing.

The voice continued.

“Don’t save her.”

Silence.

Ethan slowly removed the headphones.

“That’s me.”

He stared at the laptop.

“No.”

He replayed it.

The same voice.

The same words.

“Whatever you do, don’t save her.”

He ran the recording again.

And again.

There was no mistaking it.

It was him.

A version of him that hadn’t spoken those words yet.

Ethan checked the clock.

4:12 AM.

“She dies in nine hours.”

He looked at Maya’s photograph on his phone.

She was smiling.

Completely unaware.

“She gave me her name because she wanted someone to find her.”

His eyes moved back to the laptop.

“You wanted me to hear the warning.”

He swallowed.

“But you still left me a trail.”

Ethan reached for his jacket.

Then something in Maya’s photograph caught his eye.

He picked up the phone and zoomed in.

The rooftop.

The city lights.

Maya’s reflection in the glass behind her.

And someone standing directly behind her.

A man holding a phone to his ear.

Ethan’s breath caught.

The man was wearing a dark green jacket.

The exact same jacket hanging over Ethan’s arm.

He stared at the photograph.

Then at his jacket.

Then back at the photograph.

The phone began ringing again.

2:17 AM.

Ethan grabbed his keys.

The older version of his voice whispered through the laptop speakers one more time.

“Don’t save her.”

He opened the door.

And stepped into the dark.

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