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The Black Rose

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Summary

The night Elena Rossi turns nineteen, she receives a letter from a man who supposedly died twelve years ago. There are only three words inside: DON'T TRUST ADRIAN. She doesn't know who Adrian is. She doesn't know why her mother is terrified of the letter. And she certainly doesn't know why, hours later, Adrian Moretti appears at her doorstep. He is the heir to the most powerful criminal family in the city—and apparently, he knows things about Elena that even she doesn't know about herself. Adrian claims he's there to protect her. Elena thinks he's lying. Then people around her start disappearing, her mother's secrets begin surfacing, and Elena discovers that her entire childhood may have been built on a lie. The worst part? Adrian isn't the monster everyone warned her about. He's the person who knows exactly who the real monster is. And he's been waiting for Elena to find out.

Status
11h ago
Chapters
12
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1 — The Letter

The letter arrived on Elena Rossi's nineteenth birthday.

It wasn't the birthday gift she had been expecting.

There was no name on the envelope.

No return address.

No stamp.

Just a black rose printed in the center, its stem curling around a single sharp thorn.

Elena stared at it from the kitchen table.

"Mom?"

No answer.

She glanced toward the hallway.

The house was unusually quiet.

Too quiet.

Her mother had promised they would have dinner together tonight. She had even promised to make Elena's favorite pasta.

Elena checked the time on her phone.

7:43 p.m.

"Mom?"

Still nothing.

She pushed her chair back.

Maybe her mother had gone to the store.

But that didn't make sense.

Her purse was gone.

So were her keys.

The stove was cold, and the ingredients her mother had prepared were still sitting untouched on the counter.

Elena frowned.

Her mother never left food half-prepared.

Something was wrong.

She returned to the table and picked up the envelope.

It was heavier than it looked.

She turned it over.

Nothing.

She slid her finger beneath the flap and opened it.

Inside was a single sheet of paper.

Three words.

DON'T TRUST ADRIAN.

Elena blinked.

"Adrian?"

She read it again.

No explanation.

No signature.

Nothing.

She sat down slowly.

Who was Adrian?

She didn't know anyone named Adrian.

At least, she didn't think she did.

A sudden noise came from outside.

Elena's head snapped toward the window.

A car door slammed.

She stood.

"Mom?"

Footsteps approached the front porch.

Then—

Knock.

Knock.

Knock.

Elena's eyes dropped to the letter.

Another knock.

Louder.

She reached for her phone and checked the screen.

Nothing.

No missed calls.

No messages.

She walked toward the front door.

"Who's there?"

No answer.

Elena looked through the peephole.

A man stood outside.

Tall.

Dark-haired.

Dressed in a black coat that looked far too expensive for someone standing outside a small family home.

He wasn't looking at the door.

He was looking at the security camera.

Then his eyes slowly moved upward.

Straight toward the peephole.

Elena stepped backward.

The man smiled.

Her stomach tightened.

"Elena Rossi."

She froze.

He knew her name.

"Who are you?"

"Open the door."

"No."

His smile disappeared.

"Elena, you need to come with me."

"That sounds like a kidnapping."

"I'm not trying to kidnap you."

"Then leave."

He didn't move.

"Where's your mother?"

Elena's fingers tightened around the letter.

"What do you know about my mother?"

"More than I should."

"Who are you?"

The man looked directly at the camera.

"My name is Adrian Moretti."

The letter slipped from Elena's fingers.

It landed on the floor.

For several seconds, she couldn't breathe.

Adrian.

The name from the letter.

The stranger outside her house was Adrian.

"You need to leave," she whispered.

His expression changed.

"Who told you my name?"

Elena said nothing.

"Open the door."

"No."

Adrian's eyes moved past her.

For the first time, the amusement disappeared completely from his face.

"Get away from the window."

"What?"

"Now."

Elena didn't move.

"Adrian—"

A gunshot shattered the silence.

The window beside Elena exploded.

She screamed and dropped to the floor.

Glass scattered across the room.

Another shot.

The front door burst open.

Adrian rushed inside.

"Move!"

He grabbed her arm.

"Let go of me!"

"Unless you want to become a target, move."

Elena stared at him.

Outside, several black cars had stopped in front of the house.

Men were getting out.

Her heart pounded.

"Who are they?"

Adrian looked toward the street.

"I don't know."

"You don't know?"

"No."

He pulled a gun from beneath his coat.

Elena stared at it.

"You brought a gun to my house?"

"No."

His eyes met hers.

"They followed someone here."

"Who?"

Adrian's expression tightened.

"I don't know."

Another crash sounded from the hallway.

Adrian immediately stepped in front of her.

"Stay behind me."

"What's happening?"

Someone was inside.

Footsteps moved through the house.

Slow.

Heavy.

Getting closer.

Adrian raised the gun.

Elena's breathing became shallow.

Then—

everything went black.

---

When Elena opened her eyes, the first thing she noticed was the ceiling.

It wasn't hers.

She sat up.

Her head throbbed.

The room was enormous.

Dark curtains covered the windows.

A chandelier hung above her.

A fireplace stood across the room.

Beside the bed was a glass of water.

Elena immediately stood.

The door was locked.

She rushed toward it.

"Hello?"

Nothing.

She pounded on it.

"LET ME OUT!"

Footsteps approached.

The door opened.

Adrian stood there.

He wasn't holding the gun anymore.

"Where am I?"

"My house."

"Take me home."

"You can't go home."

"Why?"

He looked at her.

"Because your house was attacked."

"My mother."

"I don't know where she is."

"You keep saying that."

"Because it's the truth."

Elena stepped closer.

"You expect me to believe you?"

"No."

That answer caught her off guard.

"Then what do you want?"

Adrian's eyes remained fixed on hers.

"I want you alive."

"Why?"

Silence.

Elena's voice dropped.

"Why do you care whether I'm alive?"

Something unreadable crossed his face.

"Because someone else clearly does."

"What does that mean?"

He turned toward the door.

"There are things about your family that your mother never told you."

Elena's chest tightened.

"What things?"

He paused.

"Ask her when you find her."

Then he walked out.

Elena stared at the closed door.

Her mother was missing.

Her home had been attacked.

A stranger named Adrian Moretti had appeared at exactly the wrong moment.

And somehow—

the mysterious letter had known his name before she did.

For the first time that night, Elena wondered whether her mother's disappearance had begun long before her birthday.

And whether the letter had been a warning...

or an invitation.

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