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El momento donde me perdí. parte 3

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Este poema es para darle visibilidad a mi antigua yo del 2021 y 2022 que no se atrevía a ni si quiera a pensar en publicar sus poemas, quiero soltar y sanar esa parte de mí que se merecía tener toda la paz que ella quería. y cerrar esa versión de mí.

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Complete
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2
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n/a
Age Rating
16+

Niña enfermiza.

1-“Niña enfermiza.”

Si yo fui la niña enfermiza,

Esa que no lloraba porque ya sabía que era lo que seguía,

La que genero la empatía aun cuando era una niña,

Yo no sabía que era ser una niña sana porque a mí los síntomas me abrazaban,

Puedes decir que fue siempre cobardía mía,

O incluso que era ignorancia por algo que yo no sabía,

Perdón padre porque ahora comprendo que en ese momento si lo intentaste, pero yo estaba muy adormecida,

Perdón madre ahora entiendo que a ti eso también te dolía,

Pero me toco ser esa niña que en los hospitales crecía,

Y mi familia decía que no rezaba lo suficiente que dese juró dios algún día me escucharía,

Yo fui una niña enfermiza y nunca se me curo mi enfermedad,

Y ahora ya adulta sigo escuchando que nunca me cuido mi vista.

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1. Niña enfermiza.
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