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The Mafia's Reluctant Heir(Short Story)

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Summary

A ruthless cage. A soul weighed with lost hope. Ameer never belonged to the mafia world. But he was never given a choice. One by one, his allies disappeared. Will he ever manage to find his way out? Though its a stand alone shorts, it will be a spoiler for Finding You In The Dark. Those who've read it will know the hope and pain carried in every line of this book. This will be a very short story, aiming to complete by this Friday.

Status
1d ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

1. The Boy Behind The Gates

The soft pitter-patter of small footsteps echoed through the deserted hallway. Ameer stood on his toes by the window, straining to see beyond the iron bars, through which distant shouts and laughter rang. His eight-year-old legs weren’t tall enough. He dragged a wooden stool across the floor, the scraping sound loud in the silence, and climbed up, curiosity brimming in his bright hazel eyes.

An open field stretched a few yards beyond the compound walls. Children swarmed across it - kids his age, maybe older. Their shouts carried through the air, their faces turned skyward where coloured dots danced against the evening sun - kites. They swooped and climbed like wingless birds, their tails streaming behind them in ribbons of red and gold. The whole field was vibrant and cheerful, more so than any arid desert village had any right to be.

Ameer pressed his forehead against the bars, eyes clouded with longing.

He climbed down and moved through the corridors like a shadow, keeping close to the walls, away from the guards’ sight lines. Down the stairs. Across the marble foyer. Almost to the wrought iron gates-

A shadow fell over him.

“Now, what is our Little Master up to?”

Ameer’s shoulders slumped. The guard’s face came into view, rifle slung across his back. The weapon didn’t frighten him anymore.

“I want to go to the playground,” the boy complained, his eyes downcast.

The guard offered a fond smile. “Playgrounds are for commoners. You are a prince. This is where you are safe.”

The boy looked back at the sky - at the soaring kites - with a deep sorrow that did not belong to his age. “I want to be a commoner, not a prince.”

The maid came rushing out of the house, letting out a relieved cry. “There you are, Little Master! How far have you come this time?” She took the boy from the guard and hurried inside, ranting all the way.

“You gave me a heart attack! If you had gone missing, your father would have had me beheaded.”

The boy’s face clouded with confusion. “What does beheaded mean?”

The maid was taken aback. The innocence of the boy felt otherworldly inside these walls. She managed a pleasant smile and replied, “You don’t need to know that, Little Master. Why don’t you go play with your sisters?”

The boy wrinkled his small nose. “I don’t want to make dolls.”

Nevertheless, the maid deposited him with his twin sisters and left.

“Hey, Ameer.” Two lovely voices chimed in unison.

“Want to play with us?” one of them asked.

Ameer looked at the small objects scattered around - chunks of wood, pieces of glittery cloth, and palm fronds. He folded his arms and turned away pointedly.

The girls laughed together, but it didn’t last long. Though only two years older than him, they knew when their little brother was upset.

One of them touched his shoulder. “There’s a new boy. In the kitchen. About your age.”

Ameer turned. “Who?”

“The new cook’s son. He sits by the kitchen all day.”

Ameer was already moving. He snatched a lollipop from beside his sister on the way out.

“That’s mine!”

But he was gone, grinning.

He found the boy sitting in the corridor outside the kitchen, knees drawn up, watching his mother work through the doorway. Ameer recognized him from school - they’d never spoken.

Stopping in front of him, Ameer held out the lollipop.

The boy stared at it, then shook his head quickly, glancing toward his mother.

Zainab looked between them, and gave her son a small nod.

The boy’s face broke into a smile. “Thank you.”

“I’m Ameer. What’s your name?”

“Umer.”

Hesitation melted away in shared stories and bites of candy. The corridor echoed with bright laughter and the gentle tap of small feet as they chased each other through the evening.

When dinner came, Ameer refused the royal dining table with his sisters. He carried his plate to the corridor and sat beside Umer.

He watched longingly as Umer was fed by his mother with such love and tenderness.

Noticing his silence, Zainab asked gently, “Why aren’t you eating, Little Master? Where is your mother?”

With his head hung low, Ameer replied, “Mom is busy. She always has some work.”

The pain in his voice felt too heavy for an eight-year-old boy.

Zainab felt his hurt and asked softly, “Would you like me to feed you too?”

The corridor sprang to life again with the combined giggles of Ameer and Umer, and Zainab watched them both fondly as she fed the two boys together.

Little did any of them know that this small beginning would lead to twenty years of friendship.

After Umer and his mother left, Ameer strolled through the guarded corridors of the house with a new bounce in his step and a contentment he didn’t remember ever feeling before.

He found his brother in the training room.

Zafir was mid-push-up, sweat gleaming on his shoulders. At thirteen, he already looked like a man - broad and sharp-eyed, built for violence. But when Ameer ran to him, Zafir’s face softened. He caught his little brother in one arm and sat him on the wooden table.

“I made a friend today.”

“About time, little champ.”

Ameer told him everything - the lollipop, the laughter, the way Zainab had fed them both. Zafir listened, wiping the sweat from his face with a towel, his face holding small frown.

“Hmm,” he mused at last. “At least now you’ll stop sneaking out of the house.”

Ameer’s face fell. “I hate this house. It’s too big. Too empty.” He kicked his legs against the table. “Umer’s house is small. He gets to play outside.”

Zafir sighed and pulled his brother closer. “This is not merely a house, Ameer. It is a fortress - built to keep us safe from our enemies.”

“Why do we have enemies?”

“Because they hate our father. He is the mafia warlord - *The Dark Lion*. They fear to even utter his name, and so they try to... harm us.” The word *kill* felt too heavy to place before his brother.

“Why do they want to harm us? Are we bad people?”

The question caught him off guard. He chose his words carefully. “We are bad for bad people - like them. But we are also good for good people - like Umer.”

“Umer?” The boy’s eyes widened in surprise.

“Yes. He was about to quit school. Father helped him - made sure his mother had steady work. That’s good, isn’t it?”

The little face nodded slowly in acknowledgement.

A comfortable silence settled between them before the boy launched into his next round of questions.

“Why do you always do this?”

“Do what?” Zafir looked at him, genuinely puzzled.

“*This.*” The boy scrunched his face in exaggerated effort, his small hands mimicking push-ups in the air before him.

Zafir let out a hearty laugh. “That’s called exercise, you little troublemaker. See?” He flexed his arm, revealing a modest but firm bicep.

Ameer examined it with knitted eyebrows and declared, “It looks like a potato. Why would you want that?”

“A Potato?” Zafir shook his head, grinning. “To make me stronger. One day I will be like Father - stronger, smarter, respected. I am preparing for my future.”

“Do I have to do that too?” The boy’s innocence caught him off guard once more.

Zafir looked at his little brother - still small, still soft, still untouched by the weight of their world. He ruffled Ameer’s hair.

“Not if you don’t want to.”

The brothers chatted for a while longer - neither of them yet aware of what it truly cost to be the heir of a mafia lord.

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