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What Remained Unsaid

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Summary

What Remained Unsaid is not the type of poetry written in the conventional sense of it. It is a collection shaped by melancholic memories and confessional thoughts, expressed through prose and poetic fragments. It is a raw, haunting form of reflection on things that mostly remained unsaid—things that gnawed their way through the skin over time, slipped into the darkest part of the soul, and lingered there, leaving nothing but a bleeding trace of pain behind.

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few sec ago
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3
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Age Rating
18+

Saving


I stand before a door—large and shrouded in darkness. Untouched, as if it hadn't been opened in a long time.

Slowly, I open it; inside lies a vast, black room.

No windows. No other door.

The only beam of light—like a spark in the darkness—comes from the doorway I’ve just opened.

I notice a girl sitting at the far end of the room.

At the edge of the light.

I watch as she stares into the void, rocking back and forth.

I hear faint murmuring, as if she is talking to herself.

I see her head turn in the semi-darkness, and her broken voice drifts across the room as she speaks: "Did you come to save me?"

She looks familiar, yet I cannot quite make out her face.

"Save? Save you from what?" I reply, my voice trembling.

"From myself. From my thoughts."

She stands up, walks slowly toward me, and steps into the light.

It seems as though walking is a struggle for her.

I freeze.

My own image is walking towards me.

I feel an icy shiver running down my spine with every step she closes the distance.

Until we stand face to face, looking deep into each other's eyes.

I look at myself.

Into my sad, dark brown eyes.

They seem so cold.

So damn empty.

It feels so unreal.

Vivid.

And all I see is a broken soul screaming for saving.




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