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The Beast of Blackthorn Hall

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Summary

On the storm-lashed moors of Exmoor, Blackthorn Hall broods in silence—crumbling, cursed, and cloaked in legend. Locals whisper of a monster who prowls its halls, masked and monstrous, a creature twisted by time and ancient bloodlines. None return from the house on the hill. Esme Whitaker doesn’t believe in monsters. Desperate and penniless, the young scholar accepts a strange invitation to catalog a forgotten library buried within Blackthorn’s walls. But what awaits her is not dust and solitude… it's him. Tall. Silent. Watchful. The Beast of Exmoor is no legend. He’s real—and he’s been waiting. Bound by a centuries-old curse and tormented by the man he once was, he watches Esme with a hunger that has nothing to do with flesh. Something ancient awakens between them, something fated, forbidden… and far from human. To break the curse, Esme must uncover Blackthorn’s darkest secrets. But some monsters were never meant to be tamed.

Status
20d ago
Chapters
16
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter One: The Letter In The Fog

Rain clawed at the windowpane like it wanted in.

Esme Whitaker sat cross-legged on the narrow bed, a threadbare blanket wrapped around her shoulders and a chipped mug of tea cooling beside her. Ink-smudged envelopes were scattered across the quilt like fallen leaves—some unopened, others folded with rejection stamped in tidy, formal fonts. The last one she’d opened was from the university library in Exeter. We regret to inform you...

She didn’t need to read further. She could recite the rest by heart.

She leaned her head back against the wall and stared at the water-stained ceiling of her attic room. A single bulb flickered above, dim and buzzing. The room smelled of dust, damp wood, and cheap soap. The radiator hadn’t worked in weeks, and the landlady downstairs never answered the bell. Not that Esme dared ring it more than once.

Dulverton was a quiet place. The so-called gateway to Exmoor, locals called it with a tired sort of pride. But for Esme, it was just another stop in a life made of borrowed time and borrowed rooms. No friends. No family. No future.

Only books.

Books didn’t judge her. They didn’t whisper behind her back or look at her like she didn’t belong. They had been her only constant since the orphanage—since her earliest memories, really. She’d learned to read early, stealing moments with storybooks and hiding in corners while the other children played. Books had raised her. Comforted her. Saved her.

And now, it seemed, even they couldn’t help her.

She blinked hard, jaw clenched against the sting in her eyes. Crying wouldn’t change anything. It never had.

Her stomach growled, and she ignored it.

There were still a few hours left at the secondhand bookshop down the road—if she could bring herself to face Mr. Collings and his never-ending string of passive-aggressive sighs. Another long shift cataloguing broken-spined novels and dust-choked encyclopedias for a few crumpled pounds. Rent was due in two days. She was running out of time.

She rose to her feet and padded toward the door, ready to head out.

That was when she saw it.

An envelope. Pale parchment. Slipped cleanly under the door.

Esme frowned. The edges were crisp, the ink impossibly elegant. No stamp. No smudges. Just her name, written in a slanted, old-fashioned hand:

Miss Esme Whitaker

Lodgings, Room 6

Dulverton, Somerset

She turned it over. A wax seal marked the back—dark red, almost black, with an unfamiliar crest pressed deep into it. A crescent moon over a wild thicket of thorns.

Her fingers hesitated.

No one knew her well enough to send letters. And no one had ever sent one like this.

She broke the seal.

To Miss Esme Whitaker,

You are hereby offered a temporary position as Archivist-in-Residence at Blackthorn Hall.

Duties include the review, organization, and documentation of a private collection of rare and ancient texts, with the intent to preserve and catalog the contents for historical and scholarly reference.

Room and board shall be provided, with a wage paid weekly. Immediate departure is encouraged. References are not required. The work is to be conducted in strict privacy.

Transportation will be arranged upon acceptance.

Respectfully,

L.S. Blackthorn

Blackthorn Hall.

She whispered the name aloud, tasting the weight of it.

It sounded fictional. Like something from a crumbling gothic novel, all mist-wrapped towers and candlelit corridors. And yet—it was real. She felt it in her bones before she even reached for her laptop.


Her search turned up almost nothing. One old registry listed Blackthorn Hall as a private estate near Exmoor, but it hadn’t been mentioned in any official records for decades. Another source—barely legible on an outdated website—quoted an old book of local legends:

“They say the lord of Blackthorn was cursed the night the ash ran red…”

That was it. No address. No modern photos. No staff listings. Just whispers.

Still, something about the letter buzzed in her hands.

Not a coincidence. Not a scam. It felt old. Real. Like it had waited for her.

That night, she didn’t sleep.

She dreamt of a vast, echoing library, shelves climbing toward vaulted ceilings lost in shadow. Dust danced like ash in the colored light filtering through high stained glass. It was beautiful in the way old Temples were: crumbling, sacred, and too quiet to feel empty.

Somewhere far above, on a wrought-iron balcony, a figure stood in the dark.

Watching.

Tall. Still. Wrapped in shadow. Eyes like gold flame flickered to life as they met hers—ancient, unreadable, and almost... knowing.

"Esme..."

The voice echoed through the stacks. A whisper that wasn’t sound. A presence brushing against her thoughts.

She turned.

The library was gone.

Now she stood barefoot in a field of blackened ash beneath a blood-colored moon. Fog curled at her ankles like reaching hands. And through the mist, she saw them—two figures standing at a stone altar, their faces hidden in hoods.

They looked up as if they’d been waiting.

“Blood remembers,” one of them said.

“Even when the child forgets.”

“She is the last of us,” whispered the other. “Born of ancient blood. Bound to the Thorns. Marked by the moon.”

Their voices tangled with wind and memory, too old to belong to the living.

"Find the hall. Find the truth. Your name is not all you were given.”

Then fire. Screaming. A marks burning into the ash—a crescent wrapped in thorns.

Esme gasped awake, heart hammering, the echo of her name still ringing in her ears.

The letter was still on the nightstand.

The seal beside it—broken, but whole.

And then—

“Esme…”

The whisper coiled through the air, low and hungry. Not frightening, exactly. Familiar.

She woke with a jump, her skin cold, her breath catching like a snare in her chest. The letter was still on her nightstand. The seal beside it, cracked but intact.

By morning, her decision had already been made.

There was nothing left in Dulverton for her.

She packed what little she owned—a few worn clothes, her notebooks, a pendant she didn’t remember receiving but had worn since she was small. She wrote a final letter to the university. One last chance, for closure if nothing else.

And then, with fog curling thick in the streets, she boarded the early train for Exmoor.

As it pulled away, she didn’t look back.

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