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The Black Sun Oath: Prelude

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Summary

In Veyra, everyone owes the Crown one memory a year. The annual tithe keeps the Meridian standing—or so the people of Avarre have always been told. Eighteen-year-old Miren Aer has grown up watching neighbors enter the collection hall and emerge missing pieces of themselves: a first dance, a familiar face, a fear they can no longer name. Most losses are declared small. Necessary. A suitable price for the protection of the empire. Then it is her father's turn. When the Crown takes a memory he has carried for twenty-one years, Miren is forced to confront what Veyra has been taught never to question: who decides which parts of a life are expendable—and what happens when a kingdom built on stolen memories finally takes too much? As whispers of the coming Crown Trials spread and an impossible darkness touches the sun, something in Veyra is beginning to change. Before The Black Sun Oath, there was the tithe. A Black Sun Oath: Prelude is a short, atmospheric introduction to Sabine Sorrell's world of dangerous vows, stolen memories, forbidden questions, and an empire that survives by taking pieces of the people it claims to protect.

Status
1h ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

What We Give, Endures

On Tithe Day, Veyra smelled of salt, lamp oil, and other people’s forgetting.

The bells began before sunrise.

Not alarm bells. Nothing so honest.

These were soft, measured things, rung from the collection hall above the harbor as if the city were being invited somewhere pleasant.

One.

Then silence.

Two.

Another pause.

By the third bell, the streets were full.

Families came down the steep white lanes carrying breakfast wrapped in cloth and children who had been told not to ask questions. Shopkeepers locked doors they would normally leave open until midnight. Fishermen returned early, old red cords dark with sea spray around their wrists.

Along the quay, silver banners stirred in the wind.

GIVE WHAT WAS,SO TOMORROW MAY BE.

No one looked at them for long.

Miren had been awake since the first bell.

She stood behind her father’s stall pretending to rearrange jars of preserved lemons while watching the line curl around the collection hall.

“You’ve moved that one six times,” her father said.

Miren looked down.

Her hand was wrapped around the same jar.

“I like this lemon.”

“It has clearly formed an attachment.”

She set it down.

Her father did not smile.

That frightened her more than the bells.

The stall smelled of his life—fish, tarry rope, the things he could master. She’d seen him stare down storms and swindlers, a man afraid of almost nothing. So when his hand strayed, again, to the inside pocket of his coat, the small, uncertain gesture felt louder than any bell.

All around them, people clutched folded scraps of paper.

Miren saw a woman murmur to the list in her hand as if it were a prayer—the names of her children, perhaps. An old man stared at his, lips moving silently, tracing an address or the title of a favorite song.

Small anchors against the tide.

Paper shields against the forgetting.

The priests insisted no one lost anything important.

A color from a childhood room, they would soothe.

The taste of a meal eaten twenty years ago.

A half-forgotten conversation.

They had a litany of examples they offered like blessings.

Small things.

Safe things.

A person’s civic share.

Miren had never understood how anyone could know a memory was small until it was gone.

“You wrote your list?”

Her father glanced at her.

“Yes.”

“Let me see.”

“No.”

“Papa.”

“Miren.”

“What if you forget where you put it?”

“Then I assume the universe has finally grown tired of me.”

“That’s not funny.”

“No,” he said quietly. “It isn’t.”

Across the harbor, something bright moved beneath the stone.

Miren watched the silver current slide through a narrow channel cut beneath the quay.

She knew what it was: the city’s tithe, carried through the memory channels beneath Veyra. By evening, that glimmering tide would help sustain the Meridian.

That was the lesson, hammered into them since childhood.

Beyond the empire, the barrier held back Hollows and ruined magic, the hungry remnants of a world that had devoured itself. The Meridian was all that stood between Veyra and the dark.

And the Meridian, the priests said, always required power.

Everyone owed something for their protection.

She wondered if the hungry things felt grateful.

Her father followed her gaze.

“Pretty,” he said.

Miren frowned.

“That’s a strange word for it.”

“Most dangerous things make an effort.”

Another pulse of silver light traveled beneath their feet.

She imagined it flowing inland, feeding imperial wards and House workings. Somewhere, an Oathkeeper could perform magic and pay no price from his own mind because a fisherman on the coast had paid it for him.

Miren had once asked a priest whether that was fair.

Her father had banned her from asking priests questions after that.

The fourth bell rang.

The line moved.

Her father closed the stall.

Miren’s breath caught somewhere between her chest and her throat.

“Already?”

“I have been told that time continues even when you object to it.”

“I’ll come with you.”

“No.”

“You came with me last year.”

“You were seventeen.”

“I’m eighteen now.”

“Exactly. You have reached the age when I can finally abandon you responsibly.”

She folded her arms.

He sighed.

“Miren.”

“I’m coming.”

“You’re not coming,” he said for the fourth time as they passed the cooper’s shop.

“Then you’d better walk faster, because I am.”

He sighed, a sound of profound defeat.

“That is not how winning an argument works, Miren.”

Veyra climbed behind them in terraces of pale stone, tiled roofs and narrow bridges thrown between buildings that had been built wherever the cliff permitted and occasionally where it had not.

Beyond them, the sea stretched black-blue beneath the paling sky.

Normally, Miren loved the city at this hour, in the quiet before the sun grew sharp enough to show all the cracks.

Today, the silence felt different.

Not peaceful.

Heavy with a dread that coated the pale stone.

People stood silently along the streets.

Halfway down the stairs of the collection hall, a woman’s laugh died in her throat.

She stared at her husband.

“What?”

Miren couldn’t hear his reply, only saw the way the woman’s face seemed to hollow as he spoke again, the light in her eyes dimming.

Not entirely.

Just enough.

Her husband took a folded paper from his pocket.

He opened it.

Miren looked away before she could read what had been written there.

Her father did not.

“They shouldn’t take the recent ones,” he said.

“Maybe they didn’t mean to.”

His expression told her exactly what he thought of that possibility.

Another citizen emerged.

Then another.

Most looked merely tired.

One man stumbled out grinning, his list of fears fluttering, forgotten, from his limp hand.

A priest called that merciful.

Miren wondered what fear could have weighed so heavily that losing it left a man smiling at nothing—and what kind of mercy required taking part of him with it.

Her father tugged gently on her sleeve.

“Do not make that face inside.”

“What face?”

“The one currently planning the overthrow of the state.”

“I have other faces.”

“Use one.”

They reached the stairs.

Above the doors, the Crown’s insignia had been carved into white stone.

Beneath it were the words:

WHAT WE GIVE, ENDURES.

Miren wondered if whoever had written them understood irony.

Inside, the collection hall was warmer than the street.

Hundreds of citizens waited in concentric rows beneath the collection dome. White-robed priests moved between them carrying ledgers and trays of empty memory glass.

Oathkeepers stood sentinel against the walls, their silver-chased armor soaking up the light.

Their stillness was a threat all its own.

At the center of the hall sat a wide basin of molten silver.

One citizen at a time approached it.

Hands to the rim.

A priest’s quiet instruction.

A flare of light.

Then a new glass bead rising from the silver.

Miren watched one appear.

Silver.

Blue-white.

Gone into a clerk’s waiting hand.

Her father stopped walking.

She nearly collided with him.

“Papa?”

He was staring at the bead.

“I hate those things.”

She had never heard him say that before.

“So do I.”

“No, you don’t.”

“Excuse me?”

“You hate what they represent. That is different.”

“And you?”

He considered the question.

“I know exactly what they are.”

Before she could ask what he meant, a priest called his name.

“Tavin Aer.”

Her father straightened.

His expression went flat.

Miren reached for him.

He caught her hand first.

For a second, she thought he was frightened enough to embrace her in public.

Instead, he pulled something from his wrist.

A red cord.

Old.

Faded nearly brown in places.

Miren stared at it.

Her mother had tied that cord around his wrist twenty-one years ago, before his first voyage beyond the Lumen Coast.

A harbor custom.

A simple wish.

Come home to me.

Her mother had died seven years later.

Her father had never removed the cord.

“You cannot give that away,” Miren whispered.

“I am not.”

He tied it around her wrist.

The knot was one he could tie in his sleep.

Three quick loops.

A firm pull.

But his fingers, usually so nimble, fumbled for a moment, and when the knot was done he did not move them away.

“That isn’t how it works.”

“It works however I say it works. I’m older.”

“That’s not authority.”

“It is the oldest form of authority.”

“Papa.”

His eyes lifted to hers.

His face had gone still in a way she’d never seen before—not the stillness of calm, but of a man who had just understood something terrible about his own choices.

“If I come away from that basin,” he said, “and something feels wrong—”

“Don’t.”

“Miren.”

“No.”

“Listen to me.”

“I don’t want instructions for what to do if you forget me.”

Several heads turned before she’d finished speaking.

Only for a moment.

Then he touched the red cord.

“This does not mean I expect to forget you.”

“It sounds exactly like that.”

“It means I expect you to remember what I taught you.”

“Which part?”

“All the useful parts.”

“You taught me how to cheat at cards.”

“A critical survival skill.”

“How to tell whether cod has gone bad.”

“Potentially lifesaving.”

“How to insult a customs officer without technically committing a crime.”

His mouth twitched.

“An art.”

Miren swallowed.

“And what if they take the memory of me?”

The humor vanished again.

“I will still come home.”

“How do you know?”

His thumb brushed across the knot.

“I know the way.”

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