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Hell earth

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Summary

You will be shocked

Genre
Action
Author
Jasper
Status
9d ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

In a bright space where the sun is shining a person comes out he has white hair as white as the true color of the sun and he has blackis skin and wears dark clothes the person is wondering throw the wasteland then he collapses onto the floor then as he collapses he looks at the sky and sees his fiance a beautiful woman with purple hair , red lipstick and dark Brown clothes smilling at him then the person says while smiling "yulia" then as his fiance yulia dissappears she mutters "Stephen" then stephen who is the person gets up and goes into a village then in a village a little girl known locally as Rynn she is sleeping then her dog Panso wakes her up "whats wrong panso" then she realizies "oh you need water" then she gets up to the bucket and goes walking to a old man then the old man startled when waking up points a spear at her only for rynn to say "dont worry grandpa John i am perfectly fine" then grandpa John settling back scolds her "why did you startle me what do you want" then rynn asks nicely "can i have some water for Panso" then grandpa John says "okay just a little" then rynn says "thank you grandpa John" as she runs up to the water well and she gets the water and she gives it to Panso who drinks it then she hears some people arguing then its revealed its the town thief Alissa she has bright blue hair , lipstick and black clothes then alissa struggling says "oh come on i didnt mean it i didnt mean it" as she struggles then a guard on her left scolds her saying while pointing his index finger "you surely are going to regret it" then another guard says "Oi i found this guy who has bright hair and black clothes stealing water" as the guard pushes stephen down then stephen says "w-water" then they lock stephen and alissa up in a prison then alissa on her side of the cell says "pfft couldnt give me water" then she spits at the ground meanwhile at the bars Rynn tries to give stephen some water but alissa runs to her and grabs her harshly trying to get a key from Rynn as stephen calmly watches her then Stephen puts his hand on alissa's hand and he then hardly grabs it causing alissa to scream and she falls down screaming "AHHHHHH IT HURTS IT HURTS WHAT YOU DID TO MEEEEEE AHHHHHHH" as she falls down then stephen looking at the spilled cup he then looks up at rynn and stephen says "can i have some water please thank you" as rynn nods then alissa getting up mutters "hey that hurt like hell" as stephen is still on the ground then Rynn walks away then later she delivers food holding a plate with one tomato and two water bottles as she gives them to stephen and alissa then alissa immediately starts eating the tomato while stephen just takes the water then stephen after drinking says "i fell better but wont you get in trouble for this" then rynn just nods then she closes one eye and points her tongue at him cutely then alissa on the other side says "ohh yeah she doesnt talk her parents were murdered in a fire by the gangsters of this world i fell bad for kids living in this era" as alissa says that rynn has a horryfing flashback and she cries then alissa finished eating her tomato says "she was just born in the wrong era" then alissa opening her eyes says after seeing rynn crying well alissa says "sorry i didnt mean it i didnt mean it geez" as alissa looks away then stephen looks at rynn and stephen says "its hard isnt it" then rynn just nods closing her eyes then when she opens them she gets startled as stephen puts his hands on her face then stephen says "dont worry i got this" then stephen clears her tears away and pulls his hands away then alissa confused says "what the what is that supposed to do" then stephen calmly to himself closing his eyes as he gets up "the choice for her to talk more is entirely up to her" then a scream is heard then two soldiers come up and say "Rynn come with us" then the two soldiers turn around and leave then rynn before running away takes a look at stephen and she just throws the keys down then alissa says exicited reaching the key "ohhh that scream was made by Zitoh the gang warlord he hunts villages and steals women and shows no mercy to anyone rynn should be dead in a few moments" then stephen shocked by what he heard while getting up again says "what do you mean dead" then alissa getting the key to the lock says "ohhh anyone zitoh captures he breaks their kneck"as alissa tries to unlock the cell then stephen puta his two hands on the bars and bends them into theres a large enough hole for him to get out then alissa startled says "hey wait up" then stephen takes a run then alissa says while running after him "hey wait up my legs arent used for running they are used for stealing" then stephen as he gets outside hes shocked and disturbed by the horryfing scene hes seeing zitoh a tall muscular gray skin beast with red silver hair and red pants and a bare chest exposed holding rynn by the neck zitoh announces "Surrender your food right now otherwise i'll kill this girl i am holding" then when rynn screams zitoh tightens his grip on her and says "shut up stupid child" then stephen after calming down starts taking steps towards zitoh then zitohs men attack him then stephen grabs his metalic bola and starts fighting he first swings his bola at a enemy's head crushing it then on fast speed he swings it at another enemies neck breaking it then he uses one body as a shield to kill off the rest then as he is done stephen takes his steps then he gets so close to zitoh literally eye to eye as stephen says "let the girl go" then zitoh screams "BASTARD YOU KILLED MY MEN FOR THAT THIS GIRL IS DEAD" then stephen takes a fighting stance and with one punch he breaks zitoh's skull and face killing him as rynn gets send flying but then stephen catches her and stephen looking back at zitoh's body says "you were already a dead man zitoh" as he turns his head away and puts rynn down then rynn looks up at him and says "thank you Mister" then alissa getting into her car says "come on big man the car isnt gonna go without you" as stephen gets inside and the car drives away then rynn chasing the car says "STEPHEN NOOOOOOOOO" as she stops herself from going further then the village leader who is a elder named uko he puts his hand on rynn's shoulder and uko says "dont worry rynn a true warrior has to go and free the weak especially in this world where if you dont kill you are gonna be killed" then rynn looking at uko well rynn says with a bit of hope "but Stephen will come back right Righr?" Then uko turns his head around and walks away then he says "There is a chance" as Rynn looks at the sunset hope still in her eyes

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Your story has a captivating quality that makes its characters and events feel worth exploring.

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