La ardillita perdida (Adelanto)

Mia: Really nice story

ktkirata: The story is really interesting. How the character described in the story is like you can see them and picture how they move, talk and feel in the every plots. Well done writer and keep it up.

Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask

Caspian Gray: Hello everyone!I'm Caspian Gray, a writer who focuses on deep, character-driven emotional dramas. I'm currently looking for trial readers for my new short drama, "Love of the Introvert."It's a story of...

11busywoman: Happy ending, strength of love, trust, bond

Feliz: I am learning a lot about hockey because of the almost commentator-like transcript that is part of the storytelling style of the book. I like it. Coming from a country where there is no hockey culture, I am beginning to understand why it has so many fans.

lblomme: I always love a story where good overcomes evil. The sad start, the growth, and ultimate strength of the main character was well done. The story never lagged and ultimately delivered a happy ending even for characters who were less than stellar. Well done!

Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.

Jkind12: Good read. Short and sweet!