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The Unsent Message

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# The Unsent Message *Some secrets are buried. Others are waiting to be found.* For three years, Maya has lived with the pain of her brother Leo’s disappearance. No answers. No closure. Just unanswered questions and a best friend, Chloe, who has stood beside her through every sleepless night, every tear, and every desperate attempt to find him. Chloe has always been Maya’s safe place, the one person she believes would never betray her. Until one forgotten email changes everything. Hidden among old files on Chloe’s laptop is an unsent message dated the night Leo disappeared. Its contents suggest that Chloe may know far more about his whereabouts than she has ever admitted. Suddenly, memories she once trusted begin to feel like lies. Her missing brother, her vanished boyfriend, and the best friend who has never left her side are connected by something buried deep in their past. As Maya follows a trail of old photographs, forgotten messages, and secrets that were never meant to surface, she must decide how much she is willing to uncover and whether the truth is worth losing the people she loves most. Because someone has been hiding the truth for three years. And someone else is still waiting to come home. **In a story where everyone has something to hide, the most dangerous lies may come from the people who know you best.**

Status
3h ago
Chapters
11
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

The Draft

The Draft

The cursor blinked beside an unsent email, its timestamp three years old.

Maya stared at the screen, her fingers suspended above the keyboard. She had been searching Chloe’s laptop for a university assignment, and for the past twenty minutes, the only thing occupying her mind had been a stubborn formatting problem.

Now, she had forgotten all about the assignment.

The email was addressed to no one. Its subject line was empty, and the date was the same night her brother disappeared.

Maya leaned closer.

I can’t keep hiding him.

She read the sentence again, then continued.

Leo is at my family’s cabin in the woods. He begged me not to tell you, but he’s in deep trouble. Please go to him before it’s too late.

For a moment, Maya couldn’t make sense of the words.

Then she read them a third time.

Leo.

Her brother’s name had become a wound she carried everywhere. Three years earlier, he had vanished without a proper explanation. There had been questions, police interviews, rumours, and weeks of searching. There had been nights when Maya lay awake imagining every possible place he might be.

And through all of it, Chloe had been there.

Chloe had accompanied her to police briefings. Chloe had held her when another lead proved useless. Chloe had sat beside her on birthdays and anniversaries, reminding her that not knowing what had happened didn’t mean she should give up hope.

All that time, Chloe had apparently known where Leo was.

Maya scrolled to the bottom of the email.

There was no explanation. No second message. No evidence that the email had ever been sent.

Only a draft.

A floorboard creaked behind her.

Maya snapped the laptop shut.

“Hey, did you finish downloading the files?”

Chloe entered the living room carrying two mugs of coffee. Her hair was tied loosely at the back of her head, and she wore the oversized sweatshirt Maya had borrowed so many times that neither of them remembered whose it had originally been.

“Almost,” Maya replied.

Chloe placed a mug beside her.

“You look exhausted. You’ve been staring at that screen forever.”

“Have I?”

“Yes.” Chloe laughed softly. “You get that little frown whenever something isn’t working. You’ve done it since university.”

Normally, Maya would have laughed with her.

Instead, she studied Chloe’s face, searching for something she had never needed to look for before.

A lie. A hesitation. Anything.

Chloe merely nudged the coffee towards her.

“Drink it before it gets cold.”

Maya wrapped both hands around the mug.

“Chloe?”

“Hmm?”

“Do you ever think about what we’d do if Leo suddenly came home?”

Chloe paused just long enough for Maya to notice, or perhaps Maya was simply looking for reasons to be suspicious.

“Of course I do,” Chloe said. “I’d probably cry before I could say anything.”

“Even after all this time?”

Chloe smiled sadly

“Especially after all this time, Maya.”

The answer sounded right. It was exactly the sort of thing Chloe would have said a week ago, a month ago, or any time during the three years they had spent hoping for Leo’s return.

That was what frightened Maya most.

Nothing about her best friend seemed different.

Maya lowered her eyes to the coffee.

“I was just thinking about him. His birthday is tomorrow.”

“I know.” Chloe reached across the table and squeezed her hand. “We should do something for him. Remember how he used to complain if we forgot to buy his favourite cake?”

A memory surfaced: Leo stealing icing from the kitchen while the two girls shouted at him to stop.

Maya almost smiled.

Then she remembered the email.

Leo is at my family’s cabin in the woods.

She gently withdrew her hand and pretended to check the time on her phone.

“I should get going,” she said. “I promised I’d help Mum with something.”

“Already?” Chloe looked disappointed. “You only just got here.”

“I know. Sorry.”

Chloe stood and pulled her into a hug.

“Call me when you get home, okay?”

Maya hugged her back.

The familiar scent of Chloe’s perfume brought back years of shared secrets, late-night conversations, university lectures, and promises that their friendship would last long after graduation.

Maya wanted desperately to believe that those memories meant something.

“Of course,” she whispered.

When she stepped outside, Chloe was still smiling from the doorway.

Maya smiled back.

Then she got into her car, locked the doors, and sat in silence.

Her hands were shaking.

She opened her phone and searched for the Chloe family’s cabin. Several results appeared, but none looked familiar enough to confirm anything.

She had almost given up when an unknown number appeared on her screen.

A photograph.

Maya tapped it.

The image showed a dusty window overlooking a driveway. The angle suggested that whoever had taken it was standing inside a building, looking out.

Maya recognised the car parked outside.

Her car.

She looked up instinctively, scanning the surroundings. The street was quiet. Nothing moved beyond the trees lining the road.

She looked back at the photograph.

A message appeared beneath it.

I see you found the draft.

Maya stopped breathing for a moment.

Another message followed.

Don’t go to the cabin, Maya.

Then the final line.

She’s not keeping him there to protect him. She’s keeping him there so he can’t talk.

Maya read it twice.

Then a third time.

The phone felt strangely heavy in her hand.

Whoever had sent the message knew about the email. They knew about the cabin. And they knew enough about Chloe to suggest that the story Maya had believed for three years was wrong.

She typed a reply.

Who is this?

The message showed as sent.

No answer came.

Maya started the engine but didn’t move. She thought about driving straight back to Chloe’s house and demanding an explanation. She imagined the look on Chloe’s face when she mentioned the email.

Would Chloe deny everything?

Would she finally tell the truth?

Or would she look at Maya with that same familiar concern and somehow make her feel guilty for asking?

Maya put the car into drive.

She didn’t know who had sent the messages, and she didn’t yet know what had happened to Leo.

But she knew one thing.

For three years, she had been searching for her brother.

Now, for the first time, she was beginning to suspect that someone had been searching just as hard to keep him hidden.

And that someone was her best friend.

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