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El Banco de la plaza

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Lo cotidiano es responsable de la creación de millones de historias. Una hoja que cae, un cesto de basura, un banco en la plaza o una simple compañía son la chispa que enciende un relato. DMVM

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El banco de la plaza

El banco de la plaza Bicentenario, del centro de Valencia en el estado Carabobo, guarda millones de secretos, quizá de cientos de personas que se sientan a diario en él. Hoy me tocó ser cómplice de uno de sus tantos secretos.

La señora mayor que se sentó junto a mí tenía cansada la mirada. Además, el cuerpo le pesaba y las ganas de limpiar la plaza, esas creo que las guardó junto a sus dolencias en el cesto de basura que carga con ella mientras barre el lugar.

Ahora está relajada mirando el panorama y, de vez en cuando, el cuerpo se le ladea de un lado a otro, más hacia el izquierdo que al derecho.

Al verla, me di cuenta de que el cansancio la vence y no es para menos; trabaja de sol a sol, limpiando la plaza mientras tú y yo solo la observamos.

Hoy el banco de aquella plaza fue testigo de su cansancio y de mis escritos.

DMVM

2024

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