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EVEN SINNERS KNEEL

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Summary

In a town full of holy lies, the only honest man is the monster in the woods. Blackwood needed a monster, so they made Marcus one. Tattooed, silent, exiled to a foggy lakeside cabin for a violent past he won't explain, he lets the town believe whatever helps them sleep at night. Elena Vance is the town's golden girl. Quiet, devout, perfect in the front pew. But her purity is a performance, and beneath it she's starving for something real. When she shows up at his cabin in the rain, far from the chapel, he warns her the town will destroy them both. She smiles and steps closer. Even sinners kneel.

Genre
Romance,Drama
Author
Bora
Status
10h ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Even Sinners Kneel

The town of Blackwood needed a monster. It was easier that way.

When the pious mothers, the self-righteous elders, and the unfaithful husbands needed someone to judge, they didn't have to look at their own flaws. They just pointed to the lake.

They pointed to Marcus.

Every child in Blackwood was given the same warning. "Stay away from the timber cabin. He is dangerous. A criminal." They whispered about his tattoos, his silence, the coldness in his eyes. They called him a monster waiting to lose control.

Marcus never argued. In fact, he preferred it. He had come to that foggy lakeside cabin to escape his own violent past. He kept his tattoos covered, kept to himself, and let the town believe whatever helped them sleep at night. He wasn't a saint, but he was far from the monster they made him out to be.

At least, until she arrived.

Elena Vance was everything Marcus was not. She was the golden standard of Blackwood. Quiet, devout, always in the front pew with her head bowed and her hands perfectly folded. To the town, she was purity itself.

What they didn't know was that the purity was a performance. Beneath it, she was restless and starving for something real. While the town praised her innocence, she was living a secret life, having quiet affairs with men who already wore wedding rings, just to feel anything beneath the suffocating pressure of being perfect.

And tonight, the town's perfect angel walked straight into the monster's den.

The lake was covered in thick evening fog. Marcus stood by the window of his cabin, his tattooed forearms resting on the sill, when he heard it. Footsteps in the mud. Not heavy, not threatening. Uneven and rushed.

Then a sound that made his blood still. A soft, ragged gasp. Not from an intruder, but from a woman who had finally run out of places to hide.

The heavy oak door creaked open.

Elena stood in the doorway, framed by the mist. Her coat was damp from the rain, her hair clinging to her neck, her chest rising and falling quickly. The flawless, untouchable mask she wore for the town was completely gone. In its place was something raw, desperate, and unguarded.

She let her umbrella fall from her fingers and hit the floor.

Marcus didn't move. His jaw tightened as he looked down at her.

"You're a long way from the chapel, Elena," he said, his voice low and rough. "The town thinks I'm a monster. If they saw you here, they would destroy us both."

Elena didn't flinch. A slow, dangerous smile appeared on her lips. She took three deliberate steps forward until there was almost no space left between them, until he could feel the warmth of her body.

"Let them talk," she whispered, her voice trembling with fear and freedom at the same time. She pressed her palm against his hard chest, right over the tattoos they had warned her about. "They spend every Sunday pretending they aren't sinners, Marcus. I just wanted to stand next to the only real man in this town."

Marcus lost his breath. Every wall he had built, every rule he had made to keep the world out, cracked right down the middle.

With a low groan, his hands found her waist and pulled her flush against him as the cabin door swung shut, locking out the foggy night.


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