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sengmanymany: Très belle histoire , il y a de moment drôlesEt touchants

Susan: Great story, I loved it

Theresa: I like the story very much but she needs to be consistent with names is Axel's wolf's name Mace or Halo? Is his gamma to be Don or Dan? But to be fare, she's not the only one to do it. I get confused when authors changes theirr character:s name in the middle of the story.

Sarah: Hey! I really enjoyed your story. It made me wonder how you actually write. Are you someone who plans everything in advance, or do you discover the story as the chapters unfold?

Sarah: Hello! I really enjoyed reading your story. It made me curious—after finishing this one, did it give you ideas for completely new projects, or do you usually like to take a break before starting another story?

Sarah: That’s actually really interesting. It sounds like you put a lot of thought into the world before bringing the characters into it. Did you already have the main story in mind while you were building the regions and places, or did the world itself inspire the story as you created it?

Amy: Wow. This was so well written I am actually disappointed there isn't more. The character's have depth & are interesting, making this a truly enjoyable read.

Jolly Jam: Interesting juxtaposition of two different backgrounds with a plausible explanation of how they came together. I’m vested in the story of these two lovable characters. Where’s Story 2?

Kate Schimmer Child: Amazing plot and characters. And so impressive you’ve written a story inside a story. Can’t wait to read more of your work ❤️