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Thirty Days with My Stepbrother

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Summary

Engineer Eliot Baines returns to Verrill House for thirty days of stabilization work and finds his name hidden, his authority reframed, and his estranged stepbrother already live on camera. Reeve Garrick built a renovation brand on charm and control—the same tools he once used to damage Eliot’s career. Now a failing coastal estate, a relentless livestream, and a dangerous history lock them into daily forced proximity. Eliot wants a safe job, a clean record, and nothing personal. Reeve wants the project saved and one chance to prove accountability is more than a performance. But as buried footage, sponsor pressure, and old family agreements surface, every boundary is tested in public—and every private choice costs more. Thirty days. One house. No edits left between them.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1 — My Name Is on the Plans

The first thing I see at Verrill House is my name turned toward the wall.

The board is propped beside the east-parlor windows, its black lettering hidden behind a coil of yellow cable. Someone has put a freestanding sign in front of it. THIRTY DAYS STANDING, the sign says, in white letters meant to look hand-painted. Under the title, a camera operator is checking a tally light while Reeve Garrick stands in the doorway with one palm lifted toward the lens.

He turns when my boots cross the old pine floor.

“There he is,” he says. “My stepbrother, Eliot Baines. He’s consulting on the structural side while we get the family project moving.”

The camera finds me before I decide whether to let it. My safety glasses are still in my vest pocket. Salt has dried pale along the hem of my trousers from the walk up the drive. Reeve looks as if the morning has been arranged around him: hair cut close enough to keep its shape under a hard hat, dark shirt without a wrinkle, the house’s green brass latch resting behind his shoulder like a prop.

“Stop,” I say.

He keeps his hand raised. The operator keeps filming.

“The program has a call sheet,” Reeve says. “We can get the introduction cleanly and—”

“The introduction is false.” I look at the camera, not at him. “I am the engineer of record for the structural scope. My sealed plans are on that board. I am not consulting for Reeve, Garrick Built, Plumbline Live, or anyone else.”

Nadia Croft, just outside the frame, lowers her tablet. “Do you want that captured as a correction?”

“Yes.”

Reeve’s mouth changes by less than an inch. The audience will read it as concern if the edit gets to choose. I know the difference between concern and a man recalculating the room.

“We can add the title in lower-third,” he says.

“You can say it now.”

The camera light stays red. Reeve looks at the house, the board, then at the crew gathered behind Kenan Stroud. Kenan has a pencil tucked against the inside of his wrist and a tablet he isn’t looking at. He knows exactly what has happened. Everyone does.

“Eliot Baines is engineer of record,” Reeve says. “He’ll be working with us on the stabilization.”

Working with us. Not leading the structural scope. Not holding stop-work authority. But the correction exists in the raw feed, and Nadia’s thumb moves across the tablet.

“And the plan is signed,” I say.

“The plan is signed,” Reeve repeats.

That is the first useful sentence he has given me in two years.

The live segment continues because he has decided it can. He points out the east parlor’s plaster damage, the enclosed west veranda, the ocean visible through a window with a cracked lower pane. He does not point to the board. I stand beside it until the camera turns away, then pull the cable free and rotate the display toward the room.

Kenan approaches. “You want the west wing opened first?”

“I want it left alone until I walk it.”

Reeve hears him. “The first reveal is the west wall. We need the camera in there before the light shifts.”

“The first reveal is the west wall,” I say, “after temporary support.”

“We discussed sequence.”

“You discussed sequence. I signed a different one.”

His eyes settle on my face. The public version of him would smile here. The private version is less decorative.

“You’re still worried about what happened at Danner,” he says.

The room goes quiet in the way a crew goes quiet when a foreman drops a tool near someone’s foot. Not silence. A redistribution of attention.

I take my glasses from my vest and put them on. “Do not use that name without the report.”

“I’m not using anything. I’m explaining why—”

“You don’t get to explain it.”

I walk into the west wing.

The enclosed veranda has been painted the same pale gray as the parlor, but the floor gives under my right boot before I reach the first window. It is not a dramatic drop. That would be easier. The joist flexes and returns, the way a bridge does when a load has nowhere clean to go. I step back and ask Kenan for the laser.

He hands it over without speaking.

I set the receiver against the baseboard and sight along the floor. The line falls toward the old exterior wall. The camera operator edges closer.

“Back out,” I say.

Reeve stays by the doorway. “We can open the paneling and see what’s under it.”

“No. We can brace before we disturb the wall.”

“You don’t know that there’s a failure.”

The laser line trembles when someone steps behind me. I turn.

“I know the floor is deflecting. I know the west wall was altered. I know the cosmetic sequence you want puts two people under a load path we haven’t exposed.”

“The viewers want progress.”

“The viewers aren’t standing under it.”

Kenan shifts toward the crew. “Everybody out of the wing.”

Reeve’s head turns. “Kenan.”

“Everybody out,” Kenan repeats, more formally this time. “Until we have a signed condition.”

I take the red tags from my vest. The first one is numbered with a black marker. I write WEST WING — STOP WORK — UNSTABLE LOAD PATH / TEMPORARY SUPPORT REQUIRED. The card bends slightly under the pressure of my hand because the air is damp enough to soften the paper.

Reeve watches me sign it.

“You’re putting that on the first episode?” he asks.

“I’m putting it on the condition.”

“You could have brought it to me.”

“I brought the plan. You turned it around.”

The camera is still running at the doorway. Nadia says something to the operator, but the tally remains lit.

I pin the tag to the nearest exposed stud and take a photograph with the date and location visible. Then I write the same condition into the field note on my tablet, attach the image, and send it to Delia Bost, Sibyl Dowd, and Hector Yoon.

Reeve comes closer, stopping where the red tape marks the safe side of the room.

“This is a family project,” he says quietly.

“It is a trust project with a structural permit.”

“Our parents are standing in the driveway.”

“Then they should stay out of the west wing.”

The floor shifts under my boot again. A narrow seam opens where the baseboard meets the plaster. Dust falls through it, not from above but from the void beneath the wall. I hear it hit the floor. The sound is too small for what it tells me.

I crouch and shine my light through the gap.

Daylight shows beneath the masonry pier.

There is no bearing where the wall expects one.

“Kenan,” I say. “Keep everyone outside the tape.”

He moves immediately. The crew backs into the parlor, carrying tools and the expression of people who have been told a job is safe until the second it isn’t.

Reeve remains in the doorway.

“How far does it go?” he asks.

“Far enough that I am not standing on it.”

“Can you give me a cleaner line?”

“The line is the same whether you film it.”

His glance cuts toward the camera. “We need a usable close.”

“You have a usable condition. The wall is unsupported at the base.”

“If we show that, the audience sees a house coming down.”

“If you hide it, the people working inside see it after it starts.”

The operator lowers the lens a fraction. Nadia says, “We are still live.”

I step away from the gap and face the camera. “The west wing is closed pending temporary support. The visible floor deflection is not cosmetic, and no demolition will occur here today.”

Reeve reaches for the segment with a practiced change of posture. “The house has a few surprises—”

“Do not call it a surprise.”

He stops.

“It is a known condition now,” I say. “The record will carry the time, location, and person responsible for the next decision.”

I photograph the signed tag beside the daylight and upload it to the field note. The file takes longer than it should because the signal drops in the west wing. When it completes, Delia replies with a short instruction: NO ACCESS. PRESERVE CONDITION.

I show it to Kenan.

“You heard her,” he says to the crew.

Reeve looks at the phone in my hand. “Send that to the site office.”

“It is already in the site office.”

“Then send me the original.”

“You have the same copy.”

He studies me. “You don’t trust me with a file.”

“I don’t trust an unmirrored file.”

There is a beat in which the camera finds both of us and waits for a performance. I give it nothing. Reeve does, eventually, turning to the operator.

“Cut the west-wing feed,” he says. “We’ll return to the parlor.”

The camera moves. The room does not become safer because the lens leaves. I stand beside the red tag while the crew clears the threshold and the day’s first schedule is rewritten around the missing support.

Kenan’s crew clears the west wing once Delia’s preliminary message arrives. I photograph the empty room from the safe side of the tape and attach the image to the field note with the deflection, missing pier, temporary support, camera boundary, and my stop-work signature.

I put the digital copy in the external archive and the paper original in my case. Reeve asks whether I want a second copy. I tell him I want the first one beyond his owner account. He does not argue.

The house moves once more beneath the empty floor. I add the reading, then pin the signed note beside my uncovered name on the board. The west wing stays taped for tomorrow’s inspection.

Under my boot, the empty space remains.

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