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Charlotte

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Summary

Follow her journey.

Status
8yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

Looking around the room, everyone is dressed in black. Slowly walking to the casket, I gazing around the room and see familiar faces with sorrowful expressions. Noticing that there’s a lot of crosses and holy pictures of Christ. Lit candles with pictures. I hope that it doesn’t catch on fire. I’m assuming that this is church.For a funeral, maybe?

A loud cry erupted when I turned to see my mother all dressed in black, gripping onto the casket as if her life depended on it. I’m running toward the casket not caring if people think I’m being disrespectful. I finally approached her but the door opened and I turned around to see who it was. It’s my boyfriend’s brother, excuse me ex-boyfriend.

My mother turned around and suddenly stopped crying. “You have a lot of nerve coming here after what your brother did! It’s all his fault! I hate him and his family! I hope you guys get what you deserve! Tears started to form her eyes.

I have some proof!” Waving the papers in the air.

Axel, why don’t you show the police? Why are you showing me this?

“Because I want to let you see it for yourself first before the police lock up the evidence.”

All of a sudden a loud cry escaped my mom’s mouth. “He did this to my baby! My own son!

Confusion was written all over my face. Questions run through my mind. I have a brother? When was this? Where was I? How come I didn’t know about this? So many questions ponder my mind until someone or should I say something appeared beside me.

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