Limerick no. 1
"I have a hole in my heart", so you're thinking,
as you walk into a bar and get down to drinking.
Among fetid patrons and lights dimmed,
Your cup yet again being brimmed,
leaving, at last, staggering like you're sinking.
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A collection of not-quite-edited ramblings I'd like to pass off as poetry
"I have a hole in my heart", so you're thinking,
as you walk into a bar and get down to drinking.
Among fetid patrons and lights dimmed,
Your cup yet again being brimmed,
leaving, at last, staggering like you're sinking.
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Strong Dialog

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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Abeer: Every single poem touches the heart! Remove the typos tho.
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