Create New List
Share with your friends
Customize readability

Short Story: The Devil's Ride

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

Would you accept a ride from the Devil?

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
4.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Short Story

The Devil's Ride

My strength wasted steadily as I roamed through the big black woods of Norway. Only a single memory of my wife and children made me forget my aching bones and open wounds. “My hope shall be the last thing that dies, my will to return home must be kept alive.” I told myself and so, I met the evil Devil and he offered me a ride. Disguised in a beastly form, he looked exactly like I remembered him from ancient folk tales of my hometown. The Devil had a pointed snout resembling a cunning fox with long red hair protruding from his arms and legs. His eyes looked human, but there was a hellish little bastard hiding in its eye of fire and sin.

I pondered whether to take his kind yet wary offer because I knew the Devil was only drawn to my feeble soul and wane spirit. He said: “You do look tired; let me carry you a while”. And tired I was indeed. I had just fled the holy war and deserted my armed brothers in desperation to rejoin my family, alive. I had been wandering for more than eighty miles without food and little water. The end days of my diminishing life force could be counted on a single hand. The devastating thought of letting all pain be in vain with many miles still to cover, drove me to accept the Devil’s offer. I knew once the deal was sealed, that I had made the grandest mistake of my life, but I was too weak to admit it to myself. I let myself go and allowed the sin of my decision to wash over me.

The Devil offered his back to me, his eyes gleaming with corrupted glee as I clamped his fur tightly. He moved through the Norwegian woods at an inhumane speed, the rain pouring down in buckets from the grey sky above, as if the heavens shed its tears for my immoralities. The Devil kept a steady pace, running fast. An inner feeling of regret crept under my skin as his kindness could never last. “Oh God, I am only human, I’m tired, and I want to go home. Let God save my soul”. I whispered, my hands turning into fists of blame as we neared the familiar footsteps of my dear home. It was the dancing fire in his eyes when he saw the little cottage through the branches and the leaves. Doomed this day was, when my darling loved ones were drawn outside to the quivering trees and quaking earth of the fallen angel’s arrival.

My timeless memory of my wife and daughters was replaced with a vivid reality of dread and suddenly I wished I had died at war. I knew it the moment the ruler of Hell stood right in front of a life I once had. A heartbeat later I was haunted by the image I could never erase for eternity. It was the sound of my wife’s and daughter’s giggles as they sat on the Devil’s back, blinded by its vice; the ultimate price I had to pay for the ride. Flying through the sky, my darlings disappeared at the horizon. Aghast, I stared at the desolate blue yonder. At last, I was home...

The End

Let Iria Enahoro know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

0

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

Further Recommendations

Wolf's Mate

Victoria: Hi,I analyzed your work, and I think it has a very unique and engaging storytelling style. The way you present your ideas and emotions really stands out. By the way are you currently working on any other stories or writing projects?

Read Now
Beyond the Ice Wall

ashbell_02: A woman goes to Antarctica to disprove the ice-wall myth, but discovers a hidden world beyond it. Stranded and mysteriously transforming, she is rescued by a strange man who knows her fate and takes her into his world to save her.

Read Now
Bloodlines

karenfancp: I have noticed a few typos, the story line is good. I can’t put this down.

Read Now
No scent

Kritta_820: I enjoyed the storyline immensely and felt that it devolved from the average "small puny female wolf finds a royal mate." Sometimes the jumps between scenes and plots jumped ahead a little too far for my taste. For example when MC heard the update about her first mate the book suddenly changed to th...

Read Now
Marked While We Slept

Felicia: What an inspiring novel!! I enjoyed it immensely!I will definitely be looking out for more novels from this writer. It was imaginative, different and truly compelling. A real page turner

Read Now
The Alpha's Exiled Mate (ON HOLD)

Pharm: I love stories about hidden children and evil wives/girlfriends. Well written fast moving. A good beach read. Enjoy the ride

Read Now
His Silent Luna

Livelife60: Great read!

Read Now
The Luna Trials

Libre: I like the book. I read it last but prefer it to all the others.

Read Now
Short Story: The Devil's Ride