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Dark System: Revenge System

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Summary

Brian a young man who was betrayed loses everything in his life his powers, friends, relationships, social life and his family, but in what would be the end of his torment his death an unknown being called zero made a proposal "Give me your existence and I will give you the opportunity to get revenge"

Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

In the middle of a huge empty room and with the floor, ceiling and walls clean enough to see his reflection, was a boy with black hair and red eyes who was completely out of place with his clothes torn and his body covered in his own blood breathing with difficulty, feeling like a stone was in his chest every time he breathed, he wondered why he was still alive, even though his heart was broken in two, it still continued to beat he was living the worst of his nightmares, a life where there is no nothing more

“Your powers were stolen, your social life destroyed, your girlfriend humiliated with a disgusting video that was spread over the internet and so any chance of a normal life was over for the two of you, but not being enough they killed your only family, your mother and They trapped you in this place, torturing you for two full days and incapacitating you in a way that not even the greatest scientists could explain ”

He said that an unknown being wore a theater mask with a zero in the middle of his forehead and a straight black band for his mouth. The unknown being wore the outfit of a master of ceremonies crouched beside the boy who couldn’t move a finger he spoke with a sarcastic tone as he looked at the state the boy was in

“You have a great physique young man”

The unknown being made an expression of disgust when he did not receive any reaction from the boy the being put his finger on the boy’s forehead saying with an arrogant tone

“Did you know that I can give you what you need to change the situation and the prey becomes the hunter, all you have to do is accept my terms and give me your existence.”

The ascending being was unaware of the mask for the upper part of the lips, directly on the boy’s ear

“Just say yes”

The being lowered the mask again and stood in front of the boy watching the boy trying to stop speaking a single three-letter word

’” Say it, and you’ll have everything to make them pay for the hell that put you through”

The boy with watery eyes and completely red with the racing heartbeat in his last breath let out a scream of fury

“𝐤𝐢𝐥𝐥 𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐬𝐞 𝐰𝐫𝐞𝐭𝐜𝐡𝐞𝐝”

Right after losing all the sparkle in his eyes signaling the end of his never-ending nightmare

“That surprised me, although it’s not what I asked for, I take it as a yes”

After the unknown creature finished speaking, a blue energy gathered at its fingertips and a normal theater mask appeared, the smiling mask being surprised to look at the mask in its hand.

“Classic style and my boy you have a good taste unlike me”

The being crouched beside the boy’s corpse putting the mask on his face after a few seconds the mask created green energy roots all over the boy’s face sending waves of energy throughout the boy’s body and after exactly three minutes the boy opened his eyes looking to the side would see the unknown being who said

“Welcome to your new life, call me 𝙕𝙚𝙧𝙤”

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