Grant Ayers

Edge of my seat worthy

I was thrilled to read this story. From the beginning to where the story is right now I was at the edge of my chair reading from my laptop just zooming through chapters. I think if anyone is interested in a fantasy/thriller they should hop on this book!

Wait! I'll update this!

So off of the first chapter, it's needs editing. But I think I was warned that before reading this. So getting past all that I read this book as a reader. And what I thought was that I can't wait to read more chapters of this story. Because I honestly see this story reaching thousands of readers. It has potential out the ass in lamens terms.

Not what it seemed

See when I first saw the cover I thought it was just going to be some sort of high school love triangle thing that I wasn't going to be interested in. But no this book blew my mind away with its badass fight scenes, cool characters, and a very brave female protagonist. There wasn't really one mistake that I saw reading it. Would 100% recommend it to any other person looking for a spectacular fantasy.

Flawless

This story is fantasy. It's engaging, beautiful imagery, spectacular fight scenes, and spelling and grammar as far as that goes is just on point. This is a unicorn of stories. I think that if anyone has the time they should invest it in reading this story. I thought it was amazing to read it. Every second was just page turn after page turn. And the best part is that it's still going. I can't wait to read more chapters!

Must read

This whole story so far has wretched at my heart, pumped blood through my veins, and made me want to read more. The main characters in the book show a healthy relationship that I found out to be a new spotlight from the whole bad boy thing that I find on this site. It's a good story that pulls you in and doesn't let go. It's truly a must read for all those who like fantasy and romance.

Long but worth it

The story in itself is very long for the six chapters that it has. But while reading it I hardly noticed as chapter flew by one by one. It's an enticing book that deserves more readers.

The gourmet gladiator

I think that is a good book and from a author's perspective I think that I am gradually loving to write it. And I think others will love to read it just as much.

Damn!!!

I read many stories before. And I can say that this had made my top twenty in books that I like to read. I want more already. Keep up the good work author and for you the reader please check this story out you won't regret it.

Intense as F#*k

One moment the book can be calm and sad to intense to crippling depression. The last chapter (which was chapter 7 when I read this story) was just filled with sadness and intensity. I was genuinely worried about the main characters while I was reading this story. The author has a way of making you feel what the characters or feeling and allowing you to peek into their world. It was an amazing read.

I laughted through the entire book

Not saying that this book is a joke. But for what is labeled a horror it was more like a dark comedy. Because the main character is so MESSED UP. Especially in the first two chapters. My favorite chapter in the book was chapter 6 and would tell everyone that if they can get there they struck gold. It's amazing to read the story and can't wait for it to be updated more.

Went fishing

I loved reading this story. The author is amazing at descriptions and painting a picture in your mind. Truly worth 6 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟if possible. I can't wait for more chapters to be posted!!!

Damn!

So I'll be honest. I'm just one of those guys that aren't into these types of stories. So me reading one and thinking that it has so much potential to be a future read is amazing. See it has three chapters right now but I honestly can't wait to read more!!!

Longer and better

I can't wait for you to post more chapters. This is a well-thought-out plot of a story. It was interesting and always kept me guessing. This is so good considering that books nowadays always seem to be the same stuff about the same things. This was a nice twist of originality.

So good for just a sample

Since the story was a sample I'm glad I got a free glimpse of this story. And from what I read here I would recommend that you the reader should go and buy the full thing on Kindell and on any and every single other platform that this book is on. It deserves that much at least.
And for the writer, you're a genius. I'm a beginning author that just published his first story and I can see that this book will be worth every penny.

Adorable

The character Mary is funny, smart, and just cute when it comes to love interests in the story. I read up to chapter 20 and could say without a doubt that I am going to continue reading it. It's a comfortable read that doesn't lunge out at you and pull you in. It's more of a relaxing chill in the sun type of book. Not too dramatic nor too lovey dovey. The book was just perfect for me to read and would 100% recommend it to others.

Next Stephen King

This book is creepy and for horror, it's doing its job. As more chapters update the more this story will unfold. It's interesting, to say the least. And to say the most would be to say that the author's writing style is out of this world. It's creative and hooking.

A year of just typing and uploading

So I know that it looks petty to write a review for your own book. Because let me be honest, I'm more biased than most people. Especially when it comes to this mess of a book. Well, I think that it's funny and impressive. See I'm a published author that has sold over a thousand books with little to no effort. And I'm here on inkitt just to write for fun. So "The Useless Villain" came to me in a dream and I thought "do you know what would be fun?" Let's upload three chapters every Sunday for a year and see how things go. I'm not going to edit past google editing until the story is done. I know that sounds terrible. And well it is. See because the story is going from mind to screen, so no planning and editing is involved in the process. Still, I like to think that even without that stuff I'm having fun writing the story and that you the reader are having a good time too, If not then damn. You can read it in a year when I get a professional editor to look over the entire thing. Either way, I appreciate the feedback, the constructive criticism, or just the downright insults. Because it shows me as a writer where I need to improve. Thank you all ❤ I hope you all love the story as much as I loved writing it.
And if you have any questions don't be afraid to ask them in the comments. ☺

But to those who really want an action-packed comedy mixed with romance, villains, twists, and an amazing character arc, Then don't be afraid, Come and read this story.

I like it but it's short

See I would love to give a lot of praise for the novel. But seeing as it's only one chapter I can't go off on anything that stood out. Like it began we were introduced to two characters that seem to be just regular teenagers. Then the author changed it and even though it was better indeed. Put more witches involved but still, the concrete fact is that it's only the beginning. And I like it and I want to see it grow. And as for other people the person reading this. I think you should read it and then watch it grow.

Bad Ass Book

It reminded me a lot of The Wheel of Time in the way that the combat goes and the descriptions. The world is vibrant and beautiful. And with the characters being well badass and just so cool and haveing interesting dialogue between all of the characters made this an easy book to blast through.

And to the author. Thank you for the read. It was a fantastic time!

Movie in writing.

Every detail from the front to the end was perfect. Like even though there were clichés it was clichés that would see in any other movie. I loved it. I only wish that it was longer. Because I could have finished it in one day it was so interesting.

Really good!!!

Oh, it was a good horror story. The info-dumping and the depressing character is a downside a little bit. But overall I think if you want a story to read in the dark to give you chills check out this story! But overall there were no spelling or grammar errors that I could see so that's perfect. Then the plot of the story is yet to reveal itself. Like I don't know what the end goal is and I don't know if the whole plot is just Emily surviving a hell hole of a hospital or something greater yet. Either way, it would be a great investment to check out this story!

Cool

The beginning was everything that you could want except for action. Like no action in the entire story. And I was expecting at least a little action from the father. But I'll be honest. Um, I was very bored reading everything after chapter 12. I thought since he was going somewhere where super humans would be that powers and stuff would be more apparent. But that wasn't the case and it was the downfall for me. It was hard getting into a book where no action existed. I loved the first 12 chapters with a passion. And if you like a slice of life mixed with fantasy aspects the go-ahead this story is for you. But for me, I didn't like a few things. The spelling and grammar were off. Just a tad nothing to get your panties in a wad. So that wasn't a big part of it. What I didn't like was that the main character was bland and expressionless. And that kinda killed it for me. And the plot for the first twenty chapters should have been cut off and began at chapter 14 or should have kept going with the slice of life aspect at home with his family. I give this a four-star because personally I didn't like it but there is no real reason just to give it fewer stars. So to the writer, your book is worth five to the right person. I'm just not that person. I hope you continue writing. It was a fun experience reading your book.!

YA book that is dark and badass

This story reminded me a lot of my writing. It was informational and provided good dialogue. There were the tinyest of spelling and punctuation errors. But that shouldn't discredit a book. The story was intriguing and the character is highly relatable. I read it and commented through the entire thing. And it was interesting and at times a bit confusing. But I will keep reading it as more chapters come out. Because seeing this story progress will be worth it. So YOU should pick it up and begin reading it yourself. It's fantastic read for those who are looking for dark fantasy.

Real and relatable

The most realistic character that you could imagine. It was funny, sad, and tragic all mixed into a character. I loved it and couldn't stop reading it once I had it up on my phone. Just a couple swipes and I was done with it. Now I can't wait but to read more.

The knight of greed

I liked the story

Demonic Douglas

This one was great with very few mistakes so far. Can't wait to type more of it

The immortal prisoner

I liked it. Yes I am the author and yes I am bias. But it was fun to write and I think that others can enjoy the short-story