Teil I – Das Opfer
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Summary
Your summary reads really well, it is smooth and really informative without giving too much detail of what will happen! I can imagine reading it on the back of a printed novel in a shop. Really nice work so far.
I only have a couple of notable things to mention, one of which being the ~ throughout your summary. Is there a particular reason for them? And the other thing is that I hope you avoid overdone tropes that a lot of authors use in these types of books. I really want to see originality to set your work apart because your writing, from this small section, already puts you at a high mark!
Okay, your summary doesn't give away too much, but still makes the reader want to continue! Let's how this will be. I am actually excited... xD I have never read a wolf story... I just watched Teen Wolf as a teen (like when the episodes first came out... xD)