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Adorable experience

"This story gave a mix of emotions in each chapter, some happy and then sad, then too funny and spicy. The characters were really adorable and fit very well together. They are very well thought out and I love the idea of the characters bringing out new interests in each other. I love the aspect of BDSM, I thought that was very well done. There is of course the feet stuff (not my thing personally, but it was in the tags so I can only really blame myself lol) as well as some food play. I enjoyed the hint of backstory, it really helps to get the reader attached to the characters more. In the last 2-ish chapters I noticed some weird double spacing things between some paragraphs, I'm unsure if this was just a mistake or intentional, but it kind of disrupts the flow of the story/chapter, it adds unnecessary breaks and is something that is pretty noticeable. Hope this helps, wonderful writing!! :D"

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Behind The Scenes❤️

"This story is interesting, hot and spicy, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and highly recommend it to everyone ❤️"

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Parfait/Perfect

"Très bonne histoire, ça explore des choses qu'on ne voit pas souvent dans les autres histoires. C'est donc intéressant. / Very good story, it explores things that we don't often see in other stories. It's interesting."

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O m g

"LOVE THIS!!! I absolutely love this. I can NOT wait for more....gosh I hope there is more lol I need these 2 to start an amazingly beautiful relationship 😁 these 2 characters are so fun. "

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Very real.

"This short story has very real elements in it. The scenes are gritty and raw and stripped bare. The writing does have a finish to it, and though I am not normally one for "love at first sight" or romance that blossoms quickly, I can say that this story does it and oddly I really didn't mind. If you what to touch upon feet kinks, this is a good story for that. Feet is not normally something I explore, so I found it interesting. I like that this author is bold in what they decided to write about... I see a lot of writers soften their tones for one reason or another. Not this work. It's up front. If you want to pick up something a little different, this is a good short that has a happy ending."

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