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It's a good one

"The plot twist , its a good read ,an I do like the plot twist . Just wish it was a longer book or had a sequel "

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Read it

"Like many others, I binge-read this story. It’s super entertaining. The characters were likable, except for the villains (no surprise there.) And the plot was well crafted. I highly recommend."

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When Fate Takes

"Absolutely loved this book!! I finished it in 2 days. Excellent writing & storyline. Can’t wait until the next one is finished!!"

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When Fate Takes

"I read this story in 2 days and really enjoyed it. "

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When Fate Takes

"I enjoy reading the dynamics between this enthralling and assertive couple, throw in their interactions with those surrounding. The well thought off storyline and smooth character build up couple with the beautiful writing style made it so worth reading. It was on the first chapter that I was confused with the use of nouns - his/her -whether from a female or male perspective. Please go over that chapter. But after that, everything is consistently amazing. Keep up the good work!👍👍"

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When fate takes

"Appreciate the fact that it’s not overly gory since it’s a mafia kind of story. The characters are charming and love the vibes thru their interactions. Looking forward to the other books! It’s actually a good read! Thank you for sharing! 💕💕💕"

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Great story

"The writer did such a good job with the storyline. The action, the romance, and the characters' development were well thought of and will written. "

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Review

"I’ve liked everything about this book so far. I haven’t stopped reading it since I saw it yesterday. I would recommend the book to anyone."

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A great way to spend an evening

"This was such a great read! The book description drew me in and I never looked back. The overall plot was great! There were several twists that really surprised me (but in a good way). Overall, this was a great romance to read 10/10 highly recommend ♥️"

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Amazing!

"Really couldn't put it down. I started it at 18.00 and its now 3.30 in the next morning! I can go to bed now that i finished it! Amazing job athor!!!"

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Loved it

"I could not make myself put this book down. I loved every part of it the only thing that I would change about it would be to make it longer."

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Mafia wife

"Thank you. My kind of story. A llving couple despite it all. Thank you."

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Love it

"I can’t believe her mother was so evil. It one thing not to love a child but to hurt them isn’t acceptable. I hope she can heal from this "

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When Fate Takes

"I loved this story, the plot, the characters and the author’s writing style. The interaction between the two main characters is awesome. I can’t recommend this story enough. Thank you author for an excellent, interesting, exciting and enjoyable story. I will be looking for more written by you. "

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When fate takes

"Enjoying this novel! Some grammatical errors with characters but easy to make corrections "

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Beautiful

"Wow what a beautiful story.. I liked the fact that Ml wasn't a big bad boss but he's almost one. Idk why but I think after reading manyyy stories where Ml is this perfect Ceo type, big boss in everything kinda was bore me out n here it was bit different makes me giddy. Also really liked the FL. She's a awesome character. And although at first I thought Emily would be a annoying jealous ex but omg how wrong I was... She's soo sweet n like that bout her. It was refreshing that there wasn't any jealous ex'es drama but some power plays around close relatives. I was so shocked when finding out Fl's mother's reality tho. That was really upsetting n I felt sorry for FL. I mean she literally went through hell. Anywhoooo I'm soooo like soooo exited to read the next book cause I was invested in Emily n bash. I wanna see their lv story (lol) Ian was definitely a di#k.. Fl's mother didn't deserve what she got as her punishment cause she should've gotten a bigger punishment than that tbh. Prison sounds too good compared to the things she did (bit#h) Anyways nice story n definitely worth reading. Highly recommend To the readers who likes romance, eroctica, mafia stuffs, actions, bit of thriller too.... Good job n props to u writer 🙌🏻"

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