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about the story

"beautifull"

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Really good

"This was a really good story. A tough Mafia man falls in love with a sweet innocent girl. Even though she was innocent she was tough as well. Their love was spicy but real and I enjoyed it "

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Nice story

"I enjoyed this book, no grammar errors, nice flow. Thank you for your writing"

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Good book. Good reading . Good Grammar

"All good stuffs "

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Le chef de la mafia

"Très bon livre J'ai adoré Merci "

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the Mafia chef

"wow there was so much in this book. up and downs, holding my breath, laughter, fear for one of them. I thoroughly enjoyed the roller coaster ride! can't wait to read more of your work."

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amazing

"your book is amazing the characters plot was so good I love how the two main characters can switch so easily between emotions and how instead of just making it just one plot you added so many twists that got me invested into the story, I think I would love to hear a little more about how the family is doing but overall it's really good and I would love to see more of your work. "

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Désu

"l'histoire en elle même et une ptn de pépite. On arrive a se projetait dans les deux personnage ces tout simplement magnifiqueeeeee!!!! Mais la fin ces pour nous tue ces pas possible de faire sa ces juste inhumain de nous laisser avec une fin pareil qui nous donne beaucoup trop de question! Mais sinon bravo a vous avait fait une pétite!!"

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The mafias chef❤️❤️❤️

"Very interesting story line flowed very well, dialogue was superb and the characters were exceptional 🥰🥰😘😘"

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Plot twist

"Loving the plot twist. Love both character. Fast paced and mostly imaginable on how the character feel."

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Surges of Limerance 🫶🏾

"Beautifully written lovestory, combining unexpected attractions from two characters of different backgrounds 🔥🫸🏾🫷🏾❤️"

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Parfait

"Bien bien bien bien bien bien bien "

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Hot n steamy

"The best book I have read on this app.... got hooked from chapter 1 till the end. Perfect story line, good continuity and spellings"

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likee what i read no loved it ehati read

"aawwesome story like it waiting for epilog "

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The Mafia’s Chef

"This was a great story. I loved the development of the storyline and characters. I like the female lead not being so weak and standing up for herself."

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the mafias chef

"It would have been of a next chapter about the wedding or the wedding night with a plot twist or cliff hanger to end it .like for instance the baby is born and someone close to them does something to the baby"

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Die Geschichte ist gut

"Sehr gute Geschichte und mehr realistisch als ich gedacht "

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SO GOOD!!!

"Love this story!! "

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Love this Story!

"I love this story! Very interesting plot with interesting characters. I would love a second book ! I feel like so much more can be told about their story. Very good writing."

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Incredible chemistry and steamy romance

"This was really fun and entertaining to read. The pacing was really good. Nothing was drawn out for too long. It's enthralling to learn more about the main leads, although I would've loved to know how she got set up and see some repercussions for the culprits but it's not a train smash. I would highly recommend to anyone. "

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