The Rival Rule

"it's good but it's not that bad either. the plot was okay. though many errors regarding the last names of the main characters kept changing. and avery made me confuse because early in the chapter she has met the whole hockey house but the suddenly the second time i read her name it says it was her first time even when its far enough from the first mentioning of her name? can be more better but overall, i enjoy this story very much "