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Jai adorer
"Jai beaucoup aimer votre livre là fin ma beaucoup ému bravo"
Absolutely brilliant
"What a brilliant story and so well written I throughly enjoyed this "
Mafia's Reluctant Bride
"Not a bad story. A little disjointed - spending too much time on trivial conversations and not enough on the actual threats and plot. I found the "accounting" words and metaphors increased tremendously in the latter chapters and were entirely overdone and just too much of a distraction and turn off. Has great potential if time was spent on editing the repetitive words and sentences. The author has written far better stories though. "
Good
"It’s a good story, decent plot. The twist if you can call it that getting to the end is a bit rushed tho. Definitely only like a 2 on the 🌶️ scale at best. "
