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The Fox and The Alpha

"Great book. Thoroughly enjoying it. Great author."

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elisa

"Interesting, btw, are you currently writing something new?"

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Good tead

"Usually these stories have packs at odds. It's nice to see two packs working together. And the werefox angle is interesting. But only two in the world seems a bit sketchy. It would be nice to see others or at least let characters find a manuscript/scroll or something that gives insight into werefox origins and powers "

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The Fox and the Alpha

"Really loved the story. However, it would have been better if I had known that this was the 2nd book. I would have read the other one first. They should be marked someway."

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The Fox and The Alpha

"A wonderful book, some parts had me laughing so hard. Thank you "

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Foxie & Wolfie

"Amazing book! I honestly couldn’t stop reading."

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The Fox and the Alpha

"In the beginning it was a little boring, but it worked out really well for me , it turned out to be really good."

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Nice

"Het is een goed verhaal en weer eens wat anders vooral met de rookbommen en niet te veel erotiek leest lekker weg"

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The. Fox and the wolf

"Good story great family love the brothers are protective "

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The Fox And The Alpha

"Very cute story. It just needs a little smoothing out, along with some editing. I think you have a bright future🌹"

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Proof read

"Story was amazing! Loved it! A little proof reading would make it better."

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I like how Isabella is starting to find out what powers she has, but I would really like to see how more powerful she is that could out power her enemies and destroy them before they get to her. There isn't much I dislike about the book so far. I would recommend this book to anyone who likes to read about this genre.

"I like how Isabella is starting to find out what powers she has, but I would really like to see how powerful she is that she could out power her enemies and destroy them before they get to her. I also would like to see them having their own children and having a child like herself if not more than one. There isn't much I dislike about the book so far. I would recommend this book to anyone who likes to read about this genre."

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Awesome!

"Storyline was great. A lot of humor! Loved it!!"

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The Fox and The Alpha

"Pretty good book. Loved the fox plot. Some of your sentences are either backwards or words for gotten. Over all great read. I hope you have a second to it . Also there are mo pictures up top like you say. 0 "

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Shifting, wolven packs Fantasy

"Real nice story line and easy to read away. Love it !"

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I love this!

"I liked that the story plot only had one love interest!"

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great

"great so far enjoying everything and the story flows well"

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The doz and the alpha

"Beautiful piece, keep writing but less details and more dialogue. "

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Grammar

"I love the book so far- a thriller! But my complaint is the grammar. I'm honestly not trying to be rude but the grammar is a bit poor. Maybe go over the book and fix it."

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Love the book, but the grammar is a little off. Other than that, everything is absolutely perfect! 👌

"I like the book itself. I chose this rating because everything was very excellent but the grammar was kinda off. I'm not trying to be rude, but better grammar would be nice if you will."

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