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A dumb plan

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Summary

We are so dead.We are soo dead, he repeated in his mind.Suddenly he felt his body jerk, he looked up to see his friend swerve the car to the right, dodging a speed bump. You're probably questioning why they are going 30 mph above the speed limit on a highway, running away from cops. Well, let me take you to the beginning

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Tobias (Toby) Dolton, was a 15 year old boy who was at the moment, watching a movie with his friend, Bud (Buddy) Feron.These two have been friends ever since they were born. Since their parents were friends, they had been playmates ever since.Toby has long curly dark brown hair, with dark, almost black eyes.Bud, had short blonde hair, with light almond eyes.They both have the same personality, same humor, same likes and dislikes.Which is reason as to why they are such great friends.They were watching a movie about two young adults robbing a bank, which is where they got their 'perfect' plan. "

Do you think we could do that?" asked Toby his gaze still locked on the TV, as the two in the movie began taking money from the vault.Bud shrugged turning to look at him "Maybe but we'd probably get caught.I mean think about it, movies are set to go along with the plot, so I dont think it would go as smoothly as this if we tried." There was silence for a few minutes, until toby decided to speak again "Well.. you don't know until you try?"He grinned at Bud, thinking the same as toby, he sent back the same grin. Suddenly, they heard Bud's mom call his name "Buddy-y-y come down and hug your momma!"

She yelled in a sing-song voice.Bud cringed at his real name, he had always hated it.Toby found it quite funny, but he heard his mother call " Tobias! Come down honey, I have some food for you and Buddy!" Bud snickered and toby shot a playful glare at him.They both got up from their sitting place and came racing down the stairs.Their mothers were waiting for them at the table, with some fast food scattered across the table. As they were eating their parents asked simple questions, how they were doing in school, what they did for the entire saturday, why their math grade went down to an F.. Of course after this they had said their thanks, and went back upstairs to finish the movie. As soon as they got to Bud's room, they closed the door and started talking about their plan. To rob a bank.


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