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Cute love story

"Nice & cute love story.."

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Made me smile

"All the good stuff paired with bitterness, redemption, and a well deserved defeat. Love just adds to the sweetness. Great read. "

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My Unusual Betrothal

"Loved this story"

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My Unusual Betrothal

"Actually a rather enjoyable story but it did seem a little rushed. The author commented this was her first book and having read more of her work, she has definitely matured her writing style. A definite follow 👍"

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Swordsman's Thoughts

"I thought it was a pretty good little story. A girl who loses her husband to be has to marry his brother instead. No complaints that I can think. "

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My unusual betrothal

"This story was absolutely wonderful and totally amazing. I loved it."

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My Unusual Betrothal

"I enjoyed the story, was a bit confused with the medi-evil sword fighting and the modern amenities but then again it is an alternate reality. I would suggest maybe using office (I use it instead of grammarly) for punctuation and grammar. There is some editing required as there are places where it says he instead of her or bling instead of blind. There are some places where a comma is required, punctuation can change the meaning of the sentence or give it more impact. I liked that you showed how a hard callous man can have the softer emotions and needs for emotional content below the surface, that makes him more humane. Overall a good story plot, I like to read war and you provided that in your story which was pleasing for me. "

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Great story

"The time period is confusing. It is a medieval story due to battles with more modern clothing but the story plot is intriguing. Love the characters "

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My unusual betrothal

"I love it.short but such a good read!"

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Mesmerising!

"I couldnt put this book down, absolutely well written. Be proud of your self! 💓💓💓"

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Enjoyable book

"Love the plot of the book. "

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My Unusual Bethrothal

"I love everything about this book, the diction, plot and narrative style. I recommend for reading. Kudos to the author."

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My Unusual Betrothal

"This awesome piece delivered so much entertainment! I love the writing style and the amazing storyline! I wanna read more from such a talented author.👍👍"

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My love life

"I love this and waiting for another "

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Astounding romance story!

"This is a very lovely romance novel! 🥰It’s kinda short but definitely all the sizzling & action scenes were in it. It would be more awesome if it’s longer, but anyhow, can’t take my eyes off it not to finish right away. Kudos to you Dear Author! 💖"

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Amira

"It was a great story and I really loved it my only complaint is it was very short ,you are an amazing writer good luck 👍 ❤️ "

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Being the queen

"The is story is superb..every character is nailing it"

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A good read

"It's well-written. I enjoyed it. RECOMMEND."

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My Unusual Betrothed

"Great shoer story to read 📚 👏 would definitely recommend it!!!"

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Can't stop reading g this novel excellent book

"Finding the book extremely interesting difficult to stop reading"

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