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Super

"C’est une histoire géniale"

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You

"“You” was an unexpected surprise. I enjoyed your characters, they had personalities that brought a smile and were devilishly entertaining. The plot, storyline, character inner dialogue and points of view felt fresh and original. I would definitely recommend reading this book if you are looking for a different style on the vampire point of view.😎☺️"

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Review

"What a roller coaster ride but an amazing story "

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Enjoying

"I have read alot of books from this app but not this long before. I enjoy every single thing on this book and it's shown by how far I have read it. Your the best keep it up. "

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You

"Loved this so much. Wished the end was a bit different (especially with Ben) , but overall an amazing book❤️"

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Tou

"The story line back and forth was good. Not expected but alright. I just hate the naive Ness of maroband how both men used her for themselves. Mari was easy to relate to. Sex scenes needs a bit of improvement but they were impressing. Still hate that the men were being selfish fucks and how mariballowed herself to use seclx as an escape. I personally don't approve of this whole back and forth and being fucked by 2 guys in 1 day but I know it works for other so appreciate being showed this different side of life and that maribdod accept her destiny and did her best to make irlt hers and not feel so suffocating "

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You

"I really enjoyed reading this story. Although, I don't think Ben should have been made to miss Mari"'s graduation. They should have been together til he died of old age. Good story though. "

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You

"I love this book from the very beginning it had my interest. It far surpasses any book like it. I like that the main female character isn't whiny. I would definitely recommend this book to my friends and family "

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Loved it, thoughtful and clever

"Brilliant story, very clever especially the first ten chapters. Loved all the different relationships and dynamics, and the closure at the end was beautiful. Thank you "

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You

"This book was a absolute masterpiece to read! I loved the story! Such a messed up love story, but one can’t help to fall in love with each of the characters! I wait to read more by this artist! Truly exceptional Read! "

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Great Read

"It kept me interested for days - start to finish. Absolutely loved reading it in every way."

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You

"Absolutely amazing! Author you did such a wonderful job with this story! I couldn’t stop reading! Definitely recommend this story such an amazing read!!!!"

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It could have been a bit more detailed I thought it was going to be similar to the movie lol

"It is really a wonderful read,I really wish she cud have made her own decisions n stayed with Ben alone n was able to live a normal non vampire life."

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Brilliant story

"Well this story was a totally unexpected surprise! Not a genre I would normally go for and didn't realise it was that genre until I got to chapter 10 like the author advised. However I'm so pleased I read this, I absolutely loved it. So well written and I love Mari's character. I'm gutted she didn't end up with the person I wanted her to (I won't spoil it!!) but I get why it had to happen that way. Looking forward to reading more from this author, super super talented 💓"

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You

"This book is a long one and alot of sex"

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You

"Loved this awesome story and all the people but loved our girl and Ben,then Jace plus her other helpers can't wait to read the follow up"

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You

"Loved this so much and all it's people with their funny sayings and feelings also feel so sad for our young girl (Heba)hope she gets what she really wants, can't wait to read the follow up "

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Love it

"I love everything about this book there's nothing I dislike about this book I would bye this book "

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Awesomeness!!

"In actual fact I was reading another book which I can't even remember 🙃 im so glad I stumbled upon this book, ive read many vampire novels before but nothing came close to this experience. Thank you for sharing this with us "

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YOU

"I started reading this on wattpad. It's amazing as her other writing is. The person leaving a bad review is a lazy reader because she said to read to chapter 10. And the other on about her grammar that makes no sense. m2ition is known for being a grammar judge for years on wattpad. She patiently helped me write my own book. The book is excellent with amazing twists. Once you figure out what it's truly about it'll make you binge it."

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