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Part 1 is on 🔥

"The two main characters make me yearn for more. I can’t wait til Book 2! The plot is well-developed, and the erotica...let’s just say the air around me went 10 degrees higher. 🪭🔥🔥❤️‍🔥"

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Bottle cap promises

"So intense!!"

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Bottle caps

"It’s a good story. I like the dynamic between the characters. It desperately needs some editing. Missing words and misspelled words. I’m anxious to see what happens when Roman finds out Gabriel has had her along and hasn’t punished her as they planned."

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Loved it

"Loved it but was hoping for an escape and bullet between the eyes. 😠😀 Thanks for the read author! "

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Bottle cap favors

"Loving this so much"

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Bottlecap promises

"Loving this book. But you can't leave us hanging here... I need to know what Gabriel is going to do....."

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Bottle Caps Favors

"WOW!!! I am lost for words , but I will say one thing. This book grabs you , suck you in, and holds you by the balls to the very last word written. To be continued when I read the sequel."

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Great Book

"Looking forward to how this will all resolve in book 2 but book 1 was good. The writing was great and the storyline was good. The characters developed along the way and turned out different than you may have expected. All around a good book, I have enjoyed almost all the books I have read by this author!"

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Bottle cap promises

"Love the story line the plot and the characters "

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Arrrrrg

"Please please really need the second book. Wonderful story line and characters. Great writing style and hot hot scenes. Can't wait for the next book ......."

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Bottle Cap Favors

"I’m loving this story it’s not cringey but very sexy and exciting also humorous it has it all! Well done Author "

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Bottle caps

"Enjoyed start to finished, lovely writing style easy flowing "

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Bottle Cap Favors

"What a brilliant storyteller! Perfect grammar, deeply engrossing storyline and exquisite writing style. Will definitely read more of this amazing writer's books!👍👍"

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Good read

"I can't wait for the next book. I wasn't sure how I would feel about this book, but I really liked it. "

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A good read

"Looking forward to the next book "

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Loveeeeee

"This story is genuinely amazing !!! The spicy scenes are amazing and so well written🫣 I’m just nervous for the outcome / ending 😳"

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Bottle cap favours

"I love everything about this story, how intense it is "

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Review

"such an amazing book. love the plot & detailed writing style. you can tell how the characters are feeling and reacting all in one scene. spectacular "

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Bottle cap favors

"A very exciting story. Can't wait to read more "

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Amazing writer

"Amazing story telling and writing that captivates you from the start. By far one of the Best writers on this app!"

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