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Good story

"A well written plot, which keeps you wanting to read more. The characters are well written and believable."

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So good!!!…

"Love this story so far. 💖 I’m so invested in how this plays out now that she’s decided to stay. Looking forward to the next update! I selfishly hope one is posted sooner rather than later. "

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Fab, fast paced, fun

"Wonderful story, love all the characters, writer is doing a brilliant job!👍👍👍 if you want a time travelling, swash buckling, slow burn romance story - this is it 😁 But - 'mum checking kids homework work mode'- keeps kicking in. I dont think 'vapid' means what the author thinks it means, (if something is vapid its bland, boring, not very interesting), a few instances of 'seeked' when it should be 'sought', and a word that I think is meant to be 'nonchalant', but if you've never seen it written down it's an understandable mistake to make Other than those 3 mistakes it's all fabulous, I hope the author isn't offended by my spelling advice 😟 "

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What fun!

"As much fun it is reading your book, I find it doubly fun to learn the Spanish that you have mixed in. Everything about this book, so far, make me.want to add it to my printed book collection!"

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LOVE LOVE LOVE it

"I love the everything about the book; writing style, the characters, the plot. So beautifully done "

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Don't remember

" Okay so very good very nice The story is better than most on this app. So yeah. Vety interestong and unique."

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4.9/5

"I love how fierce she is! I haven’t read any fictional novels in a while with the leading lady being this much of a stuck up, which is refreshing. It does seem unrealistic considering the situation she’s in, but if one considers it as just going back in time and not having the thought of dying from an action she does because “death” means going back to your own timeline, then it’s acceptable. I rate this 4.9/5 since there are some lines that could be improved. Overall, I love it! "

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Very intriguing beginning

"While the story does not have an entirely new plot, the author has done a great job of bringing a great fantasy to life. "

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Fun idea, great execution

"So far, love the excution, idea and overall writing style. The characters behave in a believeable manner, which is always a big pro 🥰"

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Love the writing

"Looking forward to reading more as you update :) "

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