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The Brutal mind

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Summary

A beautiful poem about the struggle of psychosis

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

In shadows deep, where thoughts unwind,

A journey through the labyrinth of mind,

I glimpse the world with altered sight,

Caught in the grip of the dark’s might.


Psychosis whispers, a treacherous guide,

Unravelling the fabric of what’s inside,

Where reality blurs and fades away,

A tumultuous dance in shades of grey.


Angst and depression, constant foes,

A heavy burden that no one knows,

In the depths of despair, I find my abode,

Battling demons on this winding road.


Whispers of darkness echo loud,

Shrouding my thoughts in a suffocating shroud,

Lost in a maze, where fear takes hold,

A shattered spirit, a story untold.


Every breath tainted by silent screams,

Wandering through shattered dreams,

The weight of stress, a relentless wave,

Dragging me deeper into the cave.


Yet within this darkness, a flicker remains,

A flame of hope, where resilience sustains,

For even in despair’s relentless reign,

Strength emerges, a resilient refrain.


Through the shadows, I search for light,

A beacon to guide me through the night,

Though the journey may be steep and long,

I’ll rise above, emerge steadfast and strong.


For within the depths of psychosis’ grasp,

A spirit resilient, unyielding to clasp,

I’ll find the strength to face the strife,

And reclaim my essence, reclaim my life

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