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The Billionaire Sweetheart

"The story is moving too slow? It is my problem I am not a very patient person so I want more. It is good!"

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Billionaure's sweetheart

"The novel is awesome. I'm enjoying. Keep it up"

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Slow suspense

"They writer keeps you hanging a bit too long we are 30 chapters in. Waiting for the guts of this story to play out."

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Intriguing

"So far the book is interesting. Trying to understand and figure out what happened to Melody makes me want to read on... The writing is a bit off so I sometimes have a hard time understanding some words being stated. Needs editing because the sentences don’t make sense to me. I had to figure out what the meaning is behind the statement. Overall interesting book I want to learn what will happen next. "

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The billionaire's sweetheart

"Either finish writing a book before you post it or don't write one at all. I hate books that leave you hanging "

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Incomplete

"The story is incomplete."

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