Really good!

"I think you do really good on this book even with only one chapter I already want to read a bunch more. Though I do notice some grammar I think you do really good with the plot and the characters. TO be honest I can't make to many characters unless I get help of some sort. So I think you did really good by making ALL of the winglets and even the teachers. Although what I want to know is what is the timeline? Because so far we don't get any mention of the timeline and it would help some people if we knew. Other than that few stuff, You did really good"