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The Storms of Sorrow

"I loved it"

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Storm of Sorrows

"I’ve loved the plot! Well, any plot that revolves around fantasy is instantly my favorite, lol. I also loved the unique, formal language you were using with your book. (And all your other books, too.) It draws me in, and gets me excited rather than boring standard ones. It’s also getting me to try to use more formal language when I’m writing. You deserve these five stars I’m giving you. I hope you write more books on Inkitt!!"

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The storms of sorrow

"What a wonderful story. Beautifully written and funny, sad, inspiring, imaginative and great fun involves the reader completely. Than you I loved it"

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The storms of sorrow

"It's a good fantasy novel with lots of action. A fine tale of another world which fascinated me. Excellent imagination of the author. Love it! ❤️"

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Magical Perfection

"Once again, a great magical story. The flow and the surprises were well done."

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Loved it

"Very good story!!!😁❤️"

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The storms of sorrow

"Really enjoyed reading this book, beautiful writing."

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Awesome

"Just as good as the previous one!"

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The storms of sorrow was a good book

"To be honest when I was looking for a new book I just about past this one up but I'm really glad I didn't it was surprisingly good I really liked it as a whole"

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The Storms of Sorrow

"Great book.. I enjoyed it tremendously.."

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A book that's really hard to put down

"A beautiful story that pulls you in and reveals a complex underwater world. There is great attention to detail and well developed characters. The ending was a lovely conclusion that didn't feel rushed. It did, however, leave me hoping for a sequel! There is also a well done underlying message about the idiocy of racism. I like this story so much I'll probably even reread this book!"

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The Storms Of Sorrow

"I feel you're trying too hard to use unique words all the time, instead of standard ones and you hardly use capitals where they should be, you are forgetting periods; Punctuation is very off, when using a semicolon ";" you need a capital letter after everyone but other than that love the book."

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The Storms of Sorrow

"I like that in both of the books the main characters were different and a reader could read them as a stand alone and still not feel lost; and also how you portrayed the world. You gave life to the story making it all seem real. I would recommend both books to anyone interested in a non-cliche(ish) fantasy that'll keep you hooked from start to finish."

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This book

"Way to long and drawn out..but the story line is right on"

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