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What is your opinion?
Good story,
"I enjoyed reading the story. Some parts of it seemed a little rushed without enough detail to help me connect to the events and characters., I was able to figure out it was Grandma when it switched people telling the story, but it took me awhile.. Once I got about 3/4 of the way through, I wanted to read to the end to see what would happen."
Among the Stars
"I enjoyed the story very much. Most of the story is being told in the first person by "May". At one point the grandmother tells the story in first person from her point of view. I found this confusing and had to back track to see who was actually telling the story. Good job"
