What is your opinion?
A Compelling Story
"I have been meaning to read this for ages and regret having put it off and cannot wait to read more when I have time. The characters dialogue is interesting and captivating, especially with Salar being confused by his own slight possessive jealously and attraction and Zameera's blatant lack of care towards Salar. I love how they are characterized and cannot wait to see where this goes :) "
Preference delights
"This story is so good I have to support it on wattpad and Inkitt. Iām glad the author followed her dream to write as this story is super great and compelling. You have great grammar and wonderful detail. I am happy to continue supporting as you post more and more chapters. The names of your characters are so unique they make me smile and think to name my kids the same names. I really enjoy reading your story please post more. I recommend this to anyone who is looking for a good read!"
Preference Delights
"I like the different personalities of the characters. I especially liked Zarmeena's outgoing personality. There are a few spelling errors but that's all I can tell for the most part. I look forward to you writing more chapters."
Compelling and light
"This has been a beautiful read so far, light and airy but Iād recommend you to proofread after writing and for your grammar you can use GRAMMARLY it really helps fine tune your words, I truly like the build up and your grammar gets better in each chapter And for the characters ; I think Ahmed is my spirit animal šš, itās a beautiful read, I can recommend it if youād like"
Cute And Funny
"The first meeting between Salaar and Zarmeena in the parking lot is cute. As well as his growing interest in her with his previous disinterest of his female fanbase. Also like the cultural difference struggles of Zarmeena, and the how it's difficult to enjoy being a woman. I believe this was already mentioned, but there is no need to put the summary at the beginning of the first chapter. We already read it during the introduction. Second, I'd advise trying to show emotions more rather than simply tell them. But there's a great use of vocabulary with English not your first language, and no noticable grammar errors. "
best story
"i love the story so far.... i mostly love how zarmeena's character is beautifully defined and i love how every character is so amazing. I highly recommend this story.."
Great Novel
"I really liked the start. The character's name already took my heartš. Iām loving it so far! The characters are well-defined and thatās what makes it easy to connect with them. Keep up the good workāØ"
Very beautiful story
"I loved the way the characters are described in the story and also the way they communicate with each other It's really a good read for any time. "
A pleasant read
"I love the characters especially Salaar and their interactions. It is a pleasant story especially when you are tired at night and need a light read. Spacing between paragraphs in initial chapters wasnāt great, but it is perfectly legible later."
Such a pleasant read
"It such a sweet, pleasant story so far. I particularly enjoy the characters names as theyāre different and compelling. I do wish the paragraph structure was a bit better to make reading easier, but overall if youāre looking for an interesting story to read with engaging characters this is the one!"
This is a very compelling story!š
"I love how the characters are brought out more throughout this novel. I really like the names that you have made up. The writing style is extremely niceš«¶š¼"
Intriguing novel
"Love the different perceptions from the characters and I'm hooked on the blossoming connection between zarmeena and salaar. Iv enjoyed every chapter so far, can't wait to see where it goes! Keep it up ššš½"
Preference Delights
"I'm thoroughly enjoying the story of Zarmeena and Salaar. Finally, a strong and capable main lead who breaks the mould of typical helpless leads. I'm eager to see how their relationship unfolds. I'm invested. Looking forward to the next chapter!"
Nice plot
"Your writing style is really good. The words the language the preference everything is great. You're doing a good job. Keep it up. All the best!!"
It Was Love At First Sight!!!
"Iām loving Zameenaās story! Her tomboy personality adds such a refreshing twist, and itās interesting to see how she attracts Salaar, the wealthy manās son. The chemistry between them is unique and keeps me hooked. The writing style is engaging, but I did notice some grammatical and formatting issues, though it didn't interrupt the flow. With a bit of refinement, this story will truly stand out even more. Overall, fantastic work! Keep writing, and I canāt wait to see what will unfold!!! "
A beautiful Story
"In a world where women are neither given a chance to rise above the bench, Zarmeena is one survivor. She captures the attention of Salaar, a descendant to one of the richest men in their community. The story is one that inspires bravery into every man or woman to always take a leap, no matter the circumstances. The writer's style usea simple vocabulary and not complex words that confuse the reader. I have enjoyed the read so far. Would recommend it. I love the story and the writer's work. Great work author. KEEP IT UP. "
Preference delight
"I love the beginning if the story, Yet to read all chapters. Waiting to read the rest!"
Great Dynamics
"The Characters are great and it is lots of fun to read their dynamics and interactions. Salaar is a personal favorite: ) his and everyone else's dialogue is great! A few earlier chapters had no paragraphs which made it slightly difficult to read and the pacing was a little fast at times, but still a great read and story! : ) "
