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My Moon

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Summary

" I wanted to be born in Jupiter next time " she said as she looked up at the starry sky " Why baby " I asked her while I adjusted her in my arms holding her properly . " Because they have 95 moon , it will be pretty to watch it at night " she said , I chuckled at that. "I prefer the earth more , it only have one moon "I replied "hmm ?" she looked at me confused " The earth only has one moon rotating around it , like its one true love ." I said looking at her " Like Soulmates ?" she asked now looking at my face in wonder , her eyes doe eyes shining . " Yes My moon ...Soulmates " ................................................................................................................ "What about all those promises josh?" valeria asked as her tears fall freely, Josh turned around walking out of the apartment leaving valeria to cry for herself . AUTHORS NOTE : THIS IS NOT AN ANGST BUT DO CONTAIN SOME , VERY LITTLE. My first story (apart from the fanfictions ) All characters and events depicted in this story are entirely fictitious. Any similarity to actual events or persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The cover picture is from TWINFLAMESUNIVERSE artwork from pin interest , ( The edit is by me , please excuse me ) Complete copyright , so please no stealing or translation (without permission) .

Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
19
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
18+

AUTHORS INTRODUCTION

Hello readers , my name is juan . I am new to this platform .This is my original work which is ongoing on another platform (watty).So one of my friend suggested inkitt and here I am . I don't know if you guys will like my story , I am not a professional.

Please excuse my mistakes ,

The story contains some medical information , please don't take it seriously .

Please leave your comments on my work and feel free to criticize but let's keep everything friendly .

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